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They helped us learn how to stand, and how to walk.
". When their children become to have consciousness, they gave them much more imformation through good fables and parables.
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parents also taught their children basic skills such as washing body, cooking, cleaning home....
to name but a few
I think this phrase is not engaging with the main sentence
"real worldThe next reason.
punctuation and spacing
to take care of their children
For instance, when starting to learn how to walk, of course all of us felt a lot
this sentence need verb(s)
although parents are the best teachers is the controversial issue.
this fragment sentence means need main sentence
hopefully this helpful