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Today we have a variety of food and we have various choices to prepare food


Arshin 1 / -  
May 21, 2010   #1
Today we have variety of food and we have various choices to prepare the food. We can use microwave or oven to make food. We can go to a restaurant and just order the food. It means that we do not need to cook and we can just sit and eat what we want.

We can go to the supermarket and buy food that easily prepare. For example we can buy prepared and it can be prepared in few minutes. These ways can help us to save our time and the result is we can work on other things, like our job, studying and many other things.

If we are not enjoying at cooking, we can go to restaurant and order the food then we do not need to wash dishes or other things that waste our time.

Although today preparing food becomes very easy, we should attention to some important points .At first we must be careful about the quality of the food that we eat. Albeit preparing the food becomes easy, sometimes the quality of the food decreases. So it is a disadvantage of these fast food.

So according to above lines, today the people life is changed and it becomes better with the ways that foods prepare, but we should notice of the disadvantages of these ways like the quality.
shalini singh 14 / 23  
May 21, 2010   #2
When i was going through your essay i found that you are a strong supporter of eating outside and better cooking facilities today.
Later i found that you yourself countered your point
if it is compair and contrast essay please make two paragraphs.
in one paragraph tell the benefits like time, busy schedule no boundation to cook everyday
In second paragraph you can discuss about the quality of food and also the expenses as compared with food at home

Rest there is problem in expression and repetition of sentences which need revision

Good luck
haeddleman 2 / 7  
May 21, 2010   #3
I also think that eating "fast food", whether it McDonald's or the Olive Garden it's not as healthy as a home cooked meal. Also, some of the best memories I have of growing up is Sunday in the kitchen with my Grandmother watching her cook and bake, and have the family over. Something is taken away from this family time when you meet at a restaurant in my opinion.


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