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About my self - education; parent; activities; strength; weakness; end notes


dejiman 2 / 1  
Mar 27, 2014   #1
Hello Guys, please here is what I have written about my self.
Help me vet.
However, I will liken this to be an article but not really an essay.
Thank you.

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ABOUT MY SELF

My name is Aderibigbe Adedeji David, I was born in Ebute Metta, Lagos on 27th of September 1987. I am the second among children of four of my parent. I am officially from Lagos state but originated from Iseyin, Oyo state. I grew up in Ebute Metta and Meiran area in Lagos respectively till I was 16years old. I currently live in Ota, the suburbs of Ogun State and Lagos state.

My Education
My education and schooling is an adventure, in which I had several experiences from different schools. My first awareness into school was at Corapraige nursery and primary school, Ojokoro Housing Estate, Meiran, Lagos in which I had my nursery class. Not long, I was taken to ABC Joyce nursery and primary school to continue my nursery class, I was again sent to Metro Home School, Amoshe, Meiran Lagos to complete my nursery and primary class due to change of address. When I got to primary five, I was transferred to African church primary school to take my common entrance into secondary school.

I had my secondary education at Lagos state model college, Meiran, Ojokoro, Lagos.
My tertiary education started with the search for admission into the University. After several JAMB examinations with no success, I applied and was admitted into University of Ado Ekiti to run a sand wish program in Business Education at Adeniran Ogunsanya College of Education, Oto, Ijanikin. I later forfeited my admission after two years to pursue a course in Tourism Studies at the National Open University of Nigeria in which I graduated and was awarded B.sc (Hons.) Toursim Studies in 2012.

My Parent
My mother is an officer with the Lagos state civil service commission in the ministry of Education as a Vice Principal. She has been serving the commission for over 25years. I have been highly influenced by her spiritually, academically and financially. We call her 'Iya Maths' meaning, 'Mother of Mathematics' this in turn means she is one of the best women in my life. My father is a student Counsellor at the National Open University of Nigeria. He has been my counsellor in many ramifications such as Academics, Social and Financial. 'Baba Yoruba' as we call him. He remains a source of inspiration in my life. My parent are the primary success of my life, they have immensely contributed to my successes. They give all support to all my future ambitions. They provide all my basic needs in their well willing capacity. My life so far is comprised of a wonderful family crowned with awesome parent.

My Activities
At the age of 16 I began to realize the importance of education and computer literacy. By the time I was 18 years, I had enrolled in a road side computer training centre to acquire some computer basic skills. I realized that being competent in interpersonal communication shall immensely contribute to my future pursuit, I there after, went for many personal development conferences and joined several humanitarian organizations such as Nigerian Red Cross and Positive outreach foundation in which several projects has been carried out. I have actively participated being a field officer, coordinator and supervisor.

My Strength
Practically, I have special interest in blogging, swimming, travelling, meeting and entertaining people. Due to this cause, I have an Entertainment Platform called DEJIMANAIRE KING ENTERTAINMENT DejimanaireKingEnt BlogSpot com . I cannot see myself ever giving up these hobbies, as it provides ways for me to show my creative and innovative side.

I see my interest in pursuing Computer science, Movie Making and Video editing capable in a well rounded ability to success in any future environment I find myself.

Further in my interest in computer literacy I had touched areas such as Web Development and Administration, Computer Networking and Data Base. I co-manage Mr Latin Foundation website mrlatinfoundation org and also developed blogs based on Google blogger. I have seeming exposure to web development software's and/or Content Management systems (CMS) such as Joomla, Drupal, Impress Pages and WordPress, with this knowledge I had created numerous blogs to my profile. I can proudly say being the owner of a website project called www aridunu com is a life long endeavour that shall solidify and prove my love for computing and technology in general.

My Weakness
I aim towards perfection and I believe I can better improve in the areas in which I am weak. However, I have seemingly not identified major weak points, however, I have observed that first nervousness towards a problem or situation is a weakness. In very short time, I surmount it.

My End Notes
I have learned over the years that life is not a bed of roses and nothing good comes easy. In this knowledge I have set an edge of strength into the pursuit of my periodic aims and objectives.

I stand to be corrected and always opened to learning.
I hope to become a teacher simply because to be a true hero I should be able to breed stronger followers to succeed me when the days of my strength are gone.
Eva Novita Sari 47 / 71 2  
Mar 27, 2014   #2
Hi guys. I think that your written was very interesting because you used grammar that it was complete and I easy to understand your written.
eddies [Contributor] 25 / 1,208 476  
Apr 5, 2014   #3
I like your writing. You write well :D

I applied and was admitted into

I applied for and was admitted into

I had several experiences

I had several memorable experiences. To have a clear expression, add more adjective. One example is 'memorable', modifying 'experiences'
dumi 1 / 6,925 1592  
Apr 7, 2014   #4
I am officially from Lagos state but originated from Iseyin, Oyo state.

... this is not so clear to me. Do you mean to say;
Although I was born in Lagos, my origins are from Iseyin, Oyo state.

I am the second among children of four of my parent.

... is your mom a single parent? If so , specify that here itself.

My education and schooling ishad been an adventure, in which I had several experiences from different schools. My first awareness intointroduction to school was atthe Corapraige nursery and primary school, Ojokoro Housing Estate, Meiran, Lagos in which I had my nursery class. which was the elementary school I attended.


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