Any change , even a change for the better , is always accompanied by drawbacks and discomforts .people change because of pain , want to be better person , bad conditions of life , habits they hate want to change it , want to start again their life , people change to coexist with their future.
Like the Egyptian revolution of 25th january , that motivates to change the whole people motivates them to work , to bulid their country , to become the best people in the whole world , many people after this revloution change 360 degree , even if change is not from bottom of them , but there is at least 10 % change in the way they think . they live . they dream for tommorw for the best life ever ..
other example .. In my school .. there was a boy called sam .. he was bumptious , mean , strong .. he used his force in frightend his classmates .. on day the school .. mada a day called the most famous student every student had a book to make people vote .. he took 0 votes so he decided to change .. he became generous . kind and so on
so this examples show us why people change or what motivate people to change .. all of us will have a time that will change all his attiude or part if it
.People change because of pain , want to be better person , bad conditions ofin life , bad habits , want to start again their life , people change to coexist with their future.You may write it shortly like this...People change because they want to start a new life, to ease pain, and to coexist with their future.
Like the Egyptian revolution ofon 25th ofJanuary--what year?... , it motivatedto change the whole people motivates them to work , to build their country , to become the best people in the whole world. Many people after this revolution changedabout 360 degree. However, even it doesn't reached the bottom degree, there is at least 10 % change in the way they think, live, and dream for tomorrow to have the best life ever ..
I think you have a lot of practice...
there are lot of grammatical errors...just practice,my dear.
Thanks alot Niesaysi !:)
but i have on question ?!
this essay is related to the topic or not
thanks again !
I really like that first sentence. Hey, you should put a space after each comma but not before each comma.
And this sentence needs to be capitalized:
People change because of pain, wanting to be better person, bad conditions of life, habits they hate, wanting to start their life again, and to coexist with their future.
The Egyptian revolution of 25th January, for example, motivates people to change the whole society, motivates them to work, to build their country, to become the best people in the whole world, and many people after this revolution change 360 degrees. Even if the change does not affect everyone, there is at least 10% change in the way they think, live, and dream about tomorrow and about the best life ever.
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