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Why Materialistic People Are Less Happy in Marriage?


zer000 3 / 5  
Sep 12, 2012   #1
Why materialistic people are less happy in marriage?

'Money doesn't always bring happiness.'That is a mantra telling us wealthy does not mean everything in the world ,in fact,some real emotions or feelings are far more important than material.

Marriaged couples who prioritize money are less likely to be satisfied in marriages.Mainly, they may have high hopes for their partners, expecting he or she is able to earn a lot of money for them.If their partners are unable to do so,that will be a big problem between them.Maybe it will cause the huge dissatisfaction and complains.

The dissatisfaction also comes from comparing with other couples,especially who made of money.Take my auntie for an example,she is a enthusiast of brand-named stuffs and she always buy a lot of luxuries.Actually,she purposes to show off and fit in her social circle.The case of my auntie is not rare and this maybe a serious problem causing arguments and affects the relationship.Couples may fight for the use of money,or argue about the credit card debt.

What is more, materialistic people love their money and luxuries too much.As a result ,they will ignore their partners' feelings easily because they always think about their money first instead of considering about their lovers.

Treasure your life's partner,money would never talk to you and care about you .Only someone who loves you will show concern for you.
thaonguyen1901 10 / 29 3  
Sep 12, 2012   #2
Money doesn't always bring happiness.'That is a mantra telling us wealthy does not mean everything in the world .IN fact,some real emotions or feelings are far more important than material.

MARRIED couples who prioritize money are less likely to be satisfied in marriages.Mainly, they may have high hopes for their partners, expecting he or she is able to earn a lot of money for them. If their partners are unable to do so, THERE CERTAINLY COMPLAINS AND CONFLICT BETWEEN THEM.

The dissatisfaction also comes from comparing with other couples, especially who ARE WELL-OFF. Take my auntie for an example, she is AN enthusiast of brand-named stuffs and she always buyS a lot of luxuries. Actually, she purposes to show off IN ORDER TO fit in her social circle.The case of my auntie is not rare and this maybe a serious problem causing arguments and affects the relationship.Couples may fight for the use of money,or argue about the credit card debt.

What is more, materialistic people love their money and luxuries too much.As a result ,they will ignore their partners' feelings easily because they always think about their money first instead of considering about their lovers.

Treasure your life's partner,money would never talk to you and care about you .Only someone who loves you will CONCERN ABOUT you.

My suggestion: All of your essay is just one point: not satisfy of present because of comparing to others who are wealthier. One paragraph in the body is one new point, you shouldn't divide like this. You can find more ideas like: basic of marriage is love. Materialistic people just focus on earning a convenient life but forget their partners+ their children=> risk of divorce + break

Hope the best for you !
testing /  
Sep 12, 2012   #3
This mantra about money is as old as Adam and Eve - but it is still true even today. Good point and thought process in your essay.
uniessay 1 / 4  
Sep 24, 2012   #4
We all know that materialistic couples are not very happy and they prioritize money over their partners. Even though we know that this is true it is something that we can't easily avoid.

There are still many people who marry their partners for their money and property. This happens because money is very important in our society.
I like your essay and it has some very strong points,but i think it would be a better essay if you could address how to overcome allurement of money.


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