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Many people think being single equals freedom; Disadvantages of Being Single


Sarareh 4 / 9  
Apr 5, 2010   #1
Disadvantages of Being Single

Everything in this world has some good sides and some bad sides, advantages and disadvantages, pros and cons. Many people think being single equals freedom but it has some disadvantages that people should consider. Lack of support, not having children and loneliness are some of the most common disadvantages of being single.

Lack of support is one of the worst disadvantages of being single. When you are single you are always looking for something to catch everybody's eye. Eye catcher car, sport chrome rings, sexy dress, cool haircut and so on, comes from this feeling. Once you get married, car become a transportation facility to reach a home that is full of attention. Without a doubt one of the best pleasures in the world is the experience of giving. Every couple has the opportunity to experience this pleasure every moment. In this experience, between buying a thousand dollar outfit for yourself and a necklace, for your wife, you prefer to do the second. Treating somebody as a princess gives you the feeling you are king.

Another disadvantage of being single is to be deprived of the pleasure of having children. You feel envy every single time you see these moments: If you see a little boy learning how to ride a bike from his father, If you see a little girl sharing her ice-cream with her parents, If you see a little boy making sand castle with his mom on a beach or if you see a little girl sharing her umbrella with her father on a rainy day, this feeling is a real disadvantage of being single. For kids their parents are the strongest and most beautiful person in the world, and pleasure in the world is better than this.

Finally the other disadvantage of being single is loneliness. When you are single, you are by yourself good or bad .If you are good in accounting and bad in cooking you need to do both, while being a couple means sharing everything. Do you always forget to pay your invoices on time? Don't worry; ask your wife do it for you .Are you bad at cooking? Don't worry; ask your wife do it for you .Instead when you are washing your car, or when you are brushing your shoes, you may wash your wife's car or you can also brush her shoes.

If you know thousands of good reasons for being single, you are always looking for your mate because biologically we are born like this. After all if you ask your parent one simple question. Is getting married worth it? They all agree that yes it is.

Sarareh Mirbagheri
Vakax 2 / 50  
Apr 6, 2010   #2
If I were to start this essay, i'd want to play around "single and ready to mingle" its now easy to work around this almost cliched saying. Also, it gives the essay a certain punch that maybe some others might lack.

You can say that this sentence clearly drips of desperation going on in the mind of a single guy who is always looking for company and people to hang around with..I hope you get the idea im trying to convey...

Best of luck.
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129  
Apr 6, 2010   #3
They all agree that yes it is.

or

They all agree: Yes, it is.

When you are single you are always looking for something to catch everybody's eye -- eye catching car, sport chrome rings, sexy dress, cool haircut, and so on. comes from this feeling.

Instead when you are washing your car, or when you are brushing your shoes, you may wash your wife's car or you can also brush her shoes.--- very good! Even though you make some mistakes, your writing is clear and enjoyable to read.

Thanks, everyone, for making this a great thread.
asokapalama 3 / 18  
Apr 10, 2010   #4
It is nice to read your essay. Life is busy and some control when you are sharing your life with a partener. This is important for a sucessful life. I enjoyed by reading your essay. Congratulations.

Asoka Palamakumbura
vivien_wang 9 / 31  
Apr 13, 2010   #5
Treating somebody as a princess gives you the feeling you are king.

Well, I always think that princess and prince are a couple, and king are the mate of queen's. It seems a little weird. Or, you mean the feeling of being a father, since I regard the King as the Princess's father?

As for the children part, or parenthood part, well, I don't think this is a problem for singleness. There are single fathers and single mothers, and some of them are very successful and great parents.

Anyway, I like this essay. Very interesting topic and nice writing:)
vuhaiyen 1 / 2  
Apr 15, 2010   #6
Oh My god. I am planning to be a single girl. therefore i don't have to worry about anything, after reading your essay i think i should change my idea as soon as possible.


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