My Your essay:
At present, one of the most controversial topics is what influences our personality and development most?(no need for the question sign) Some people believe it is the character we got (try to use formal words) pursue from the (certain period) pregnancy that decides what we would be in the adulthood, while some others dispute (that) it is the experience we obtain in from the society to build our life lives. Let us examine these two points of view before sending presenting out my opinion.
The people who consider the characteristics we are born with as major influence on in our development, would argue that according to scientist, both physical features and human intelligence are decided by DNA. What is meant by this is that before we come into the world, all the features of us ours, such as the color of our skin and hair, what we would look like and our heights, are already defined by genes in DNA. For instance, the bodies of black people are created with higher quality than other species, that is why they with the most championship in race in Olympic Games(check for the meaning).
That may sounds ideal theoretically, however, other people would point out that what distinguishes animals and human beings is the society. Individuals can not live alone away the society in which both our personality and development are both formed. Therefore, the experiences we may have in our life lives would influence us most. For example, a scientist ever conducted an experiment in which he separates two male twins boys into different countries to check how circumstance can affect individuals. After twenty years, he found twins speaking different languages and having developed distinguishing habits, only same in appearance.
After checking arguments above, we can safely reach to our conclusion, although the abilities we are born with my affect our life(?) a bit, the experience we gain from society would influence us most, since we are all social creatures.
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