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ielts: life cycle of the silkworm / visitors vs local customs & behaviours


sobin 12 / 24  
Aug 28, 2011   #1
Hi,
First of all thanks a lot for your time and patience.I would like to receive any kind of corrections about my essay.
Unfortunately i couldn't upload the picture for task-1 with this essay.
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Task-1:-
The diagram show the life cycle of the silk worm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
Ans:
The picture give information about the life cycle of silkworm and about the stages of the silk cloth production.
In detail,the life cycle of the silkworm starts from the moth.Eggs,produced by the matured moth,take days to turn as a silkworm.They are fed with mulberry leaves.After, four to six weeks silkworm larva starts to produce silk thread around its body.This cycle takes about three to eight days.Later,larva turns into cocoon and remain for sixteen days.Furthermore,after sixteen days the moth comes out from the cocoon.

The cocoons are selected by the experts for the silk cloth production.The carefully selected cocoons boil with water to unwind silk thread.Usually,the unwind silk thread will be three hundred to nine hundred meters long.The workers twist the unwind thread and soak into the dye.These threads are used for the weaving of silk cloths.

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Task-2:-
Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviours.Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Ans:-
Nowadays most of the countries are trying to attract visitors to their country for its economic development.Therefore,some of these countries follow liberal policies for their tourist promotions.However,some people believe that the visitors should follow local customs and behaviours.On the other hand,some people stand against to this opinion.In fact,both views have its own values.

In detail,the visitors always try to understand and enjoy the cultural and historical heritage of the particular country.Moreover,following local customs and behaviours are one of the ways to show respect to their culture.It helps to keep those customs pure.However,some countries follow orthodox believes and they enforce visitors to follow their customs.Some of the middle east countries,for instance,use strict rules and regulations against female freedom.Apart from this, they insist everybody to follow 'sharia law' in their community.

On the contrary,some people strongly believe that the cultural differences should be welcomed by the host countries.Cultural differences always help to understand about different customs.Meanwhile,it brings cultural development onto the society.Moreover,multicultural societies may be one of the symbols of modernisation.For example,most of the developed countries like united kingdom,America etc are multi cultural.They always welcome cultural differences into their country.

In a nutshell, in a host country,which follow liberal policies in its cultural differences ,the visitor feels free and enjoyment moreover,they will try to learn from the host countries culture.However ,a visitor should remember to respect the customs and behaviours of the host country.


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