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devabe2005Threads: 41
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Author: Devaraj T N
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Jan 29, 2013, 05:49am   #1
QUESTION
There is a historical building in your town and the city council wants to pull it down, because there is no money for repairs. You are not happy with this decision. Write a letter to the city council and say

- Why is the building important?
- Suggest a solution to finance the repairs.


ANSWER
Sir/Madam,

Subject: Concern on decision to crack down of Perambur Museum building.

I am devaraj living in venkatraman street, Perambur, Chennai, India. Recently, I saw the news about push down of Perambur Museum building. I was shocked after hearing this news because you know that this building is built by ancient king and after him, the British had kept as museum where it contains ancient sculptures, antiques, coins, artifacts and so on. Moreover, the style and architecture of the building depicts ancient arts and culture. It is store house of wisdom and it is a source of information for everyone in our locality.

Due to shortage of fund you had taken this decision but it is unfair to locality. I and locality people are very much worried about decision of crack down of the historical building. As you know it is symbol of our area. Everyone in this area wants it to be renovated and museum should be opened back in the same building so that local people will get benefit to acquire more information about the historical life. Please reconsider the decision of crack down of the building.

Yours faithfully,
Devaraj



joythblessyThreads: 87
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Author: Tessy Joseph
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Jan 29, 2013, 08:19am   #2
hai Dev...

Overall good attempt...

:because I know that...

:if u have taken this decision due to the shortage of funds....

:local people including me....

:renovated the museum and ...
Tessy


Arun0506Threads: 26
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Author: Arunamanivannan
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Jan 29, 2013, 10:16am   #3
Hi Dev,
I feel like this is a nice letter. I too wrote the same one yesterday but not yet posted.
But now I feel that was not good enough

Keep it up

Regards,'
Arun


dumiThreads: 1
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Author: Duminda
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Jan 29, 2013, 10:22am   #4
devabe2005:
I saw the news about push down of Perambur Museum building.
................."demolishing" is a good key word to use for destroying buildings.
devabe2005:
I was shocked after hearing this news because you know that this building is built by ancient king and after him, the British had kept as museum where it contains ancient sculptures, antiques, coins, artifacts and so on.

This was a shocking news for us because this building has a great historical value; It was built by an ancients king and then the British had converted the building into a museum. Today it hosts many ancient sculptures, antiquities, artifacts etc.
devabe2005:
. It is store house of wisdom and it is a source of information for everyone in our locality.

It is a treasure house for knowledge seekers and a symbol of national heritage.




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