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'John Halas a cartoonist' - the cartoonist research essay


Rhettgray 3 / 13  
Mar 3, 2012   #1
Rhett Gray

John Halas a cartoonist from the young age who formed the longest-running animation studio in our history, developed techniques and set trends that were of great significance in the world of animation.

John Halas was born in Budapest on April 16; 1912.John Halas earliest drawings were free-lanced to various French magazines when he was a teenager in Paris in 1930. He learned his craft under George Pal. John Halas met his wife, Joy Batchelor, in 1937 when advertising for help. He Begin his career, making advertising animations with paper cut-outs. Halas left Pal in 1933 to study at "The Studio", a private graphic-design school run by Alexander Bortnyik and Laszlo Moholy-Nagy as a split-off from the famous German Bauhaus. They formed their own company, and later, through an introduction by John Grierson, the documentary filmmaker, got a job with J Walter Thompson, the advertising agency. John Halas and Joy Batchelor got married in 1940, the same year that they formed Halas & Batchelor Cartoons Ltd. They happened to be in the right place at the right time: the advent of the Second World War produced a demand for propaganda films, which kept the studio busy .By 1945, Halas & Batchelor was the largest in Europe. John Halas president of ASIFA, the International Animation Association, of which he was a founder member, president of ICOGRADA, the international design association, chairman of the British Federation of Film Societies, as well as acting in several other film-related societies.

Halas was one of the a author of the technique of film animation it talk about "The use of a matching sound track is discussed, and there are sections on puppet films, widescreen animation, and animation techniques which are being used in the future, including computer animation". He wanted the increasing combination of animation and lives action in films. John Halas was a keen innovator, and his studio was always among the first to use new techniques including computers, holography, 3D and the like as they became available. Not all the techniques were successful, but, in the process, he met scientists who in turn were influenced by the possibilities of animation. Halas's hard work for the animated cartoon, he saw as an international rather than national form.

John Halas had work over more 2000 films in his lifetime but the film, everyone know him for is feature-length adaptation of George Orwell's political fantasy Animal Farm most people it call his greatest bid to world fame. It was released in 1954,also won critical acclaim worldwide. John Halas had his hand in lot of kind of work like TV entertainment, commercials and expansion. Halas & Batchelor devised the logo for ABC television and made series for TV such as Foo Foo. John Halas started to work on commissions for TV series from other studios he work on shows like Popeye and Jack Wrather Corporation's The Lone Ranger.
Kibin - / 1  
Mar 4, 2012   #2
Hi Rhett,

You need more help than just basic proofreading. A lot of your sentences don't make sense, there are a few instances of run-ons, and some general issues with idea flow and sentence structure. This, in my opinion, is definitely not a final draft that is ready for proofreading. You could really benefit from a lot of feedback and in-depth editing.

Best,

Kibin
OP Rhettgray 3 / 13  
Mar 5, 2012   #3
Can you help ...my writing skills is not what people call good


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