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IELTS; Intelligent/ Humor/ Reliable - Which one of these you look in your friend?


gyal 3 / 5  
Apr 19, 2013   #1
What do you want most in a friend someone who is intelligent or someone who has sense of humor or someone who is reliable? Which one of these characteristic is most important to you? Use reason and specific example to explain your choice.

Friend is most important companion in your life. All friends have different characteristic, some are very frank and some are very intelligent. Also someone has a sense of humor and reliable. So in my point of view, reliable friend is most important to me. Here I will explain my choice and give a good example.

Firstly, friend must be reliable. They must trust each other, from that we gain respect and love. Whether your friend is poor or rich and educated or uneducated. We should respect your friend and give lots of love. Be companion your friend forever, whether they are in sorrow or enjoy life.

As for me I met lots of friend and hangout with them tool, but dolman is my best friend forever. She is very intelligent and educated girl. The most important that she is reliable and very compassion. She is always being with me, when I am in problem or trouble. She support and care me as my sister.

Finally, I would to say that; friend is part of parcel in our life. So I believe that everybody love your friend like river and its flow forever and don't love your friend like flower. It will dies after season change. So be reliable and respectful friend .
dumi 1 / 6,925 1592  
Apr 19, 2013   #2
Hi gyal,
First I have a request for you :) ... You need to provide a meaningful line for the subject (your essay topic). This also helps you to attract more comments for your essay.

Friend isa most important companion in your life.

.... yes indeed :)

All friends have different characteristics, some are very frank and some are very intelligent.

.... Better you keep this idea in a more broader sense;
People are very different in their characteristics and friends are no exception. Some are very intelligent and some are not. Some love humor while some are moody. You can rely on some friends, but not on every friend.

So in my point of view, reliable friend is most important to me.

For me, reliability is the most important characteristic that I look for in my friend.

Firstly, friend must be reliable. They must trust each other, from that we gain respect and love. Whether your friend is poor or rich and educated or uneducated. We should respect your friend and give lots of love. Be companion your friend forever, whether they are in sorrow or enjoy life.

... give a more specific example to support this reason. Talk about a situation where the friendship has got strained because your friend was not reliable.


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