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The impact of overpopulation; Pros & Cons



shohruhbekThreads: 1
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Author: shohruh nazarov
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Mar 23, 2013, 03:03pm   #1
To start with,I can say that overpopulation has pros and cons.As the prefix 'over' means 'more than desirable', the process may cause concerns like lacking of natural treasures. Furthermore,there may not be enough food to supply people owing to overflow of population.Because the number of farms and food fields will have be reduced.
Moreover,meet with difficulties related to living areas.As the number of people is increasing, surely the need for a place to live will be devoleping too.
Apart from that , it creat danger for our environment. For example, if a counry is overpopulated, there wilk be much more need for pruducts such as wheat and cotton .And the people will have to cut down more trees in order to make furniture or to make the ground vacate. In addition, life also be difficult owing to unemployment. Becouse it may not be possible for the government to provide all the with a job.
On the countrary,overpopulation has a positive side. It is that there will be mord talented people in an overpopulated community. The talented people will be able to make innovations.For instance, they may be capable of creating highly developed technologies. In short , overpopulation has negative sides than positive. Becouse it may be impossible to satisfy all the need of people by creating new things and powerful technologies.



Amber1204Threads: 2
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Mar 23, 2013, 07:56pm   #2
Well i totally agree with you but the world was created for everyone; we have enough to share and to go around to the poverty stricken areas, but we are just too greedy to let go some of our wealth.


dumiThreads: 1
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Mar 28, 2013, 10:41am   #3
What is the purpose of this writing? A term paper? or for IELTS/TOEFL?
Whatever it is, it looks so short as an essay.
shohruhbek:
To start with,I can say that overpopulation has pros and cons
.............. this is not something that reader would be interested to read :( It does not tell any new idea to the reader. Everyone knows it has both pros and cons.
shohruhbek:
As the prefix 'over' means 'more than desirable', the process may cause concerns like lacking of natural treasures.

shohruhbek:
Because the number of farms and food fields will have be reduced.

The reason is the land for cultivation would not be sufficient to produce food that would feed everybody.
shohruhbek:
it create danger

shohruhbek:
It is that there will be mord more talented people in an overpopulated community

This is my suggestion;
Overpopulation benefits the society with more skilled and talented work force and labor.


shohruhbekThreads: 1
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Author: shohruh nazarov
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Apr 4, 2013, 11:50am   #4
Thanks for your comments. You're right I made several mistakes. But I typed the words in phone.Some of my mistakes are due to that, for instance 'mord' instead of 'more'.




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