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Imagine that you have received some land to use as you wish. How would you use this


kawin 1 / 1  
May 22, 2012   #1
Imagine that you have received some land to use as you wish. How would you use this land? Use specific details to explain your answer.

Land is a valuable resource for humans being. If I was a landlord, I would prefer to use my real estate to build shelters, farming, and school. Personally, I think that those things have many benefits for society.

First of all, I would like to construct many shelters in my land so that I am able to stay in there without danger. When I go back to my home, I will feel relax because I think that a house is places that protect me from distributed weather, natural disasters, and fierce animals. Moreover, I will allocate my land at least seventy five percents for my relatives and friends to build their home in order to come up with small communities in its land.

Furthermore, in order to develop farming, I have divided my real estate into two parts. Firstly, I will grow many diversified crops like spinach, coriander, coconut, and mango in my land. Prior to sell several products in market, I will store vegetables and fruits for living purpose. Secondly, I will raise livestock for consumption and exchange with other people. Such ways help me live without depending on anyone.

Last but not least, as a lot of children need to go to study far away from my land, establishing schools within my land is necessary. Having not educational institution, students may use more time to go to their school since they will face a traffic jam. As a result, learners have little time to review their subjects. However, school villages will reduce this problem and help students to meet their teacher closely. So, they will understand their courses in all details.

While most people ignore the usefulness of some land, I turn to believe that only one acre can improve the society's qualities of life. According to His Majesty the King, the king has bestowed the philosophy that his subjects should live with sufficiency economy. This concept points out that many people should allocate their land for living, agriculture and building college. If they can do that, a subject of the King will be able to adjust themselves from vulnerable economy.
hadi1981 25 / 44  
May 22, 2012   #2
Your essay is good and make sense

go on

and try more and more to give benefits for others also
OP kawin 1 / 1  
May 22, 2012   #3
Thank you for your comment
Kawin


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