Though I am engineering student going, I was able to manage my working hours and college hours as both are at different timing as well as located at the same area.
It is not necessary to mention this in you first baragraph. First paragraph basically tells the reader what is the purpose of the letter, and who you are in some instances. It is best to place all the details on your second paragraph.
It will be better enough for me if you could consider me to transfer my work location to another office branch next to Alexandra road and it was only 2 km away from my new college building. I hope there will not be any issue on this as far I am doing my duty efficiently.
First of all this sounds rude for me. Secondly, you should also mention how the company can benefit in the process of transferring you to another branch for them to consider your case.