Question in task 2 : In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it a valuable work work experience, which is important for learning and taking responsibility. What is your opinion?
In my opinion, I think that children work in work place and learn is definitely valuable and helpful, while whether works are paid or not .
My advise:- Don't mention
or not as the question is talking about paid work only. If you are saying the opposite side of the paid work then in my opinion you need to mention voluntary work, child labor etc, which doesn't have any relevance with the task question.
I would rephrase the sentence as
"In my opinion, work place experience for children is definitely valuable and helpful while they are paid."In this generation, some of companies
I would rephrase as below:
Nowadays, companies prefer to hire.Few suggestions that I thought of sharing.