To my view, (The perspective of your essay is implied.) Reading and writing ability are very essential right away (Clarify what you mean by "right away" [from birth? from entrance into the educational system?]) . They support communication around the world regarding business, education and online chat. By using computer-based technologies technology, people can simply and quickly come into contact with others who live in a remote place.
Imagine a scenario in which employees who work in different companies can contact with one another. There are two companies that deal in the same type of business. Both All employees of the two companies have to cooperate with one another to produce a desired result. By using computers which that have email and online letters, the employees find it very easy to exchange information promptly. Therefore, the predicted outcome (which one?) is achieved.
In the second place scenario, a school is able to allow its students to provide its students with self-learning education. This always happens around the world, especially in America. Students living in Alaska do not have to go to a campus which is located in New York because they do not have to come to collect materials and books, and take an exam. By using a computer, they can do these activities from the computer screen. The school has the responsibility to send materials via online to the students so that they are able to learn on their own. Moreover, they can take and submit the online exam to the school immediately.
Finally, people around the world can have a conversation with one who lives very far away. I live in Singapore and bump up against communicate with two friends who stay in China though online. This is the best opportunity to get in touch with the friends whom I have never seen in person.
To sum up, It is impossible for people who live in the fast-growing world to fall in with strangers without computers (what does this mean?). Many arenas such as business, education and online chat among people need the computers to read and write to people who live around the global (convoluted sentence).
Not a very strong essay, to be honest. Consider re-organizing your thoughts and scenarios, and make sure that you fully understand your prompt.
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