Wether learning at schools is better than that at home or not is a matter of controversy.
I think the word "wwhther" has the meaning "or not". Here are two examples:
A.I did not know whether he would come together.
B.Whether we go abroad depends on how much money we have.
You can see that there is no "or not" in both sentences.
learning at official schools has a great posistive influence on the child scientifically, socially and even physically.
"at school" is okay.
it's strange to say a child develops scientifically. I guess you intended to say academically.
which make them suitable for the pupils' needs and age.
which makes them be geared to pupils' demands and cognitive development
meet friends at the same age which help to develop their characters socially.
makes friends of same age
develop their social skills
The social role of the schools is not only limited in the class and the hall but also in the different clubs that are responsible for developing the student talents such as acting or singing.
is not restricted to helping children develop knowledge or skill
arouse students' talents
Hi, i think it's better to state the advantanges of home education rather than the drawbacks of school education. Because school education is the most popular way all over the world.
Besides, you listed too much examples and they are too detailed. Try to combine some of the examples into one.
Good luck