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the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activty.



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Mar 4, 2010, 08:55am   #1
Some people believe thatSome people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by humanactivity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to
live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support
your answer.


People believe that the earth is being harmed by human activity. According to me
me "Earth is better place to live, however it is being ruined by human activity". Like
deforestation, pollution in water , atmosphere and earth surface.
Firstly, I accept as truth that earth is getting worsen day by day because of human activity.
Such as, Man is cutting ...

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Mar 5, 2010, 03:09pm   #2
Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) --- either harmed or damaged is okay. They are both good!

...by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to
live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support
your answer.
Oh, I see, ha ha, the esay starts below...

People believe that the earth is being harmed by human activity. According to meIn my opinin, Earth is better place to live because o human activity, but it is also being ruined by human activity. It is being runed by activities such as deforestation, pollution in water, pollution in the atmosphere, and pollution on the earth's surface.

Firstly, I accept as truth that earth is getting worse day by day because of human activity.
Such as For example, man is cutting many trees for his needs. Cutting wood for making furniture, houses and for firewood, people are disturbing wildife ecology.

More and more deforestation is done, more solar energy is not converted, and the utilization of solar energy is being decreased.

As it increases chemical levels, it leads to decreases in the fertility of the soil.


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Author: Hai Tran
   
Mar 5, 2010, 07:18pm   #3
People believe that the earth is being harmed by human activity. According to me
me "Earth is better place to live, however it is being ruined by human activity". like
deforestation, pollution in water , atmosphere and earth surface.
Firstly, I accept as the truth that earth is getting worsen day by day because of human activity. Such as, Man is cutting many trees for he`s his needs. Cutting wood for making furniture's, house and fire work. Due to which ecology is getting disturbed. As more and more deforestation is done more solar energy is not converted and the utilization of solar energy is being decreased.
Secondly, due more industrialization many chemicals in gaseous state are let into the atmosphere which leads to air pollution.Vehicles which burn petrol and diesel expel out carbon dioxide in atmosphere. These also contribute to the damage of ecological balance.
Finally, farmers use fertilizer in the farm for proper growth of plant also ruined the earth surface. As it increases chemical level which leads to decrease its fertility of the soil. Also, people make the rivers dirty by disposal of sewage matter into it. Hence the purity of water decreases.
To sum up, the earth is better place to live however it is being continuously ruined by the human activity.We should take measures to stay earth a better place.

In the thesis statement, you say earth is better place but ruined by human activity. I don't get it. Which side do you support? If both, then I don't see the "better place" part in your body. I think you should state a clearer opinion, which in this case is "human activities ruin the earth". Hope this helps ^^




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