sorry!!I wasn't very especific because in my previous thread I explained what I had to do and why,
but I completely forgot that neew people will read this new thread...so, to anser your question, NO, this is not a formal essay. I am writing essays because I am taking a course of Academic Writing, the teacher said thet if we want we can invent some evidence. However, I did do some research about this topic before writing and the statistics and evidence are real!!! Honestly. I don't agree with you unmarried couples living together (why is this a problem?), maybe it is not a problem for you, but in my opinion it is and a serious one, maybe because I am a religion person, I am married and I firmly believe that marriage is the most amazing and sacred thing, but I also Understand that not everybody thinks the same...that is normal... ; )
I really don't understand whay you said... This issue requires a more HUMANE angle. Monetary problems NEVER push one towards divorce! Thats baseless!(ok, maybe that holds true for someone who truely believes in "Money - root of all happiness") Quote your source and maybe then i'll buy it!!! You think that monetary problems can't not be tha cause of divorce, but according to what I have read it is, and I can also tell you that two friends have got divorced two years ago just because of this, so in some cases even when it is difficult to believe, it can be the root of happiness that don't take marriage seriously, In my case I would never get divorce for that reason because I do think that marriage will have many adversities, but when you overcome them, then it is streghten, an you are prepared for more and more, so happiness only depends on you : )
Yes you are right, it's really difficult to make an outline first and then write the essay based on the outline, and even more...when you give the outline to the teacher ad then he will compare and tell you that you include new things, but luckly I just have to write one more essay, and then my course is over...sorry!!! but as you have realized I didn't do a great job, but at least I tryed my best, and I am happy for that.
Thanks a lot!!!!!!! :)