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Agree or disagree That distance learning and online computer classes should replace class room learning.

Where ever we turn our gaze we will see the chnges.changing is the nature of the world. Man through the ages undergoes to the changes. Some time these changes are worse but most of the time it will helpfull.We can see the changes in our education system also. If we look in the past the only way we found to get education was to go to college or school. But in now days as the new technologies are interning in the world these technologies make the world computerized and electronic. This advancement affects our education system also. The invention of the computer and internet made the education system more advance and mordoinizeed.

In our country we can see two types of education first one is direct learning and other one is indirect learning. In direct learning student goes to school and college and interact with the teachers face to face. It is true that face to face interaction leaves a deep impact on teachers and student both. In class room learning student not only meet with the teachers but also come in touch with the verity of student which is also helpful in getting knowledge. Through this way student can share there views and adopt the others students view.

On the other hand indirect learning that is distance learning and online classes are the morden way of getting education. Some times what happen that some people are not able to go to college and attained the classes because of some circumstance chances in these situation distance learning and online classed help them to complete their education and fulfill their dream of better carrier. for example here I want to illustrate the story one of my friend he was very intelligent and has a good academic status but in the middle of the graduation his father died and he was next earning member of his family after his father in this situation it was not possible for him to go to college and complete their education in this situation with the help of the online classes he was to complete his graduation with his job. Some times people want to get high education but it is not possible for ever human being to go to another country and complete his wish but through the indirect education facility student can easily get education from other countries also. Some people feel hesitations to go to college because of their age at this situation they can complete his qualification through online classes.

In my opinion both the way of education have their own place and importance. One can not replace another.Distance learning and online classes should supplement the real class room learning, can not replace it .It could be effective solution to get every one educated.

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Ensure your subjects and your verbs agree. For instance, "Sometimes what happens is that some people are not able to go to college and attain the classes because of some circumstances or chances; in these situations distance learning and online classes help them to complete their education and fulfill their dream of a better career ."

One space should separate each word or punctuation mark and the word following it. For example, "One can not replace another. Distance learning and online classes..."

"In direct" is one word: "indirect."

"In my opinion,both ways of education have their own place and importance. One cannot replace another. Distance learning and online classes should supplementphysical classroom learning, not replace it. It could be an effective solution to get every one educated."

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