Our lives are the sum of all our choices.
So, that means that choices are the building blocks of a life. It means that choices are sacred. Cool idea... Maybe it should say:
A life is the sum of all one's choices.My first impression after reading the first paragraph is that the decision seems like... not
that important... but I will keep reading to see how you explain it.
In addition, I was not truly fond of science in the first place. Oh, well I guess it was not a difficult decision!
Oh, wait... that is an interesting twist, ha ha, you enrolled in science after all! Awesome... okay, I like it! I give it an A. Fix this, though:
The main reason I joined the scientific section was to please
my father , who is a
physician . He used to call me "the little doctor" when I was young, and he
thought I would succeed him.
Actually, it was fine the way it was... but I like it this way.
you know, with your aptitude for language and literature, you can become a different sort of physician. You can use language to help people... for example, teaching therapeutic exercise or nutrition, etc. You don't have to choose only one career, despite the impression we get in school. You can use language and literature to help people alleviate pain and stay healthy.