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Description on Telecommunicating.


tranquanghuy321 1 / 3  
Dec 12, 2012   #1
Hi. Can you help me correct this paragraph:

Telecomminicating is a form of computers communication between homes and office. For employee whose job invlve sit at a terminate, the location of the computer is of no consequence. If the machines could commuincate through telephone line, when work is completed, employee can dial the office from a distance site. Recently survey estimated that there is approximately 8.7 million telecommuter. Although numbers is rised anually, the trend doens't come out to be as significance as predicting when the news published.

Thanks.
kingkevin - / 5  
Dec 12, 2012   #2
Telecomminicating issome a form of computers communication between employees's homes and office. For employee whose job invlve (involve) sit (sitting) at a terminate, the location of the computer is of no consequence. If the machines couldcan commuincate through telephone line, when the work is completed, employees can dial the office from a distance(distant) site. Recently survey estimated (estimates) that there isare approximately 8.7 million telecommuter. Although numbers is are risedrisingannually , the trend doens't come out to be as significance as predicting (predicted) when the news published.
OP tranquanghuy321 1 / 3  
Dec 12, 2012   #5
I wonder "the numbers" or number Kevin.
kingkevin - / 5  
Dec 12, 2012   #6
The numbers is correct :)
kingkevin - / 5  
Dec 12, 2012   #8
It's all I can do :D
dumi 1 / 6,925 1592  
Dec 12, 2012   #9
Telecomminicating is a form of computers communication between homes and office.

Telecommunication is a form of communication that takes place through technolobical means such as telephone, internet, etc. Telecommunicating removes geographical and time barriers in communicating with one another and is largely used by people to work from home.


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