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Describe a diagram that shows the enviromentl issues raised by a product


sweetheart87 11 / 31  
Jan 7, 2011   #1
Describe a diagram that shows the environmental issues raised by a product over its life cycle.

The diagram shows us the environment emission increased by the production of industry chain.
We can see a different steps into the chain.
Planning and design the consumer goods is the first step. After that ...

HELP ME PLEASE!!!!
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129  
Jan 11, 2011   #2
Hi Ilaria!

I'll try to improve this... you should put all these sentences into one paragraph.

The diagram shows us the environmental emission increased from the production of an industry chain. We can see a different steps into the chain. Planning and designing the consumer goods is the first step. After that there is production of goods with the use of materials and energy resources. Consequently consumer goods are packaged and distributed to national and international stores. Consumers buy and use them, like white goods, computers, telephones, TV. Following that, a part of all this material will is discarded, and another part is recycled -- for example paper, glass, alluminum.

Finally the cycle restarts again. The life cycle of goods continues and it never stops!

:-)


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