There are 2 opposite sides have been formed on this issue such as Supporters and Opponents.
Well, every argument have supporters and opposers. Therefore this sentence sounds a little mild.
On the contrary, the opponents including me claim that it is the violation of right to life as proclaimed in the Universal Declaration of Human Rights.
On the other hand, opposers, like me, claim that it is a violation of human rights as proclaimed in the Universal Declaration of Human Rights.The other negative side of death sentence is that it prevents offenders to find right way and being a part of community again.
This is a good point. Everybody deserve's a second chance sort of thing.
Additionally,to know that someone somewhere was executed can be a bad conscience for the community and brutally executed methods can be wound psychology of people.In my opinion,the capital punishment must be changed with the life imprisonment which the most of democratic countries apply.
This sentence is way too long. Pls rephrase it.
I like your essay even though I'm not on your side. You have understood the essay and written it to support what you believe in. I hope my small suggestions helped. :)