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[TOEFL]Daily homework is necessary or not


bluesnow 1 / -  
Mar 27, 2011   #1
The topic of should teachers give homework for students every day due to its complexity. Some people think it is necessary while others don't about it. I have also developed my own view as well. In my opinion, I prefer the first one. I think it benefits for students by daily homework.

On the one hand, doing homework is a good opportunity to practice. By doing assignment, students could review their own study every day. Beside, teachers may ask some questions which are easy to misunderstanding. After finishing these questions, students could figure out the problem they have and remember it.

On the other hand, doing daily homework can push students to study. In general, there are many decade students in a class, teacher can't supervise their students at the same time. One of the ways to push them to study is homework. If there is no assignment in the class, some persons only review before the term, and may discover they forgot what the teacher taught at that time.

On another hand, it cause students study in group. Each student may not figure out all of the questions. To solve this problem, he/she will find their classmates to discuss. So do others. When a group of people is assembled, each person can contribute their ideal in the team. By discussing, students can learn not only how to solve the problem, and improve their social ability.

In the nutshell, there are many advantages in giving daily homework. Though it has some disadvantage such as make students under pressure, it is still a good way to push them to improve their skill. I think my reasons are good enough to support my claim.
kelp0308 4 / 15  
Mar 29, 2011   #2
The topic of should teachers give homework for students every day due to its complexity. Some people think it is necessary while others don't about it. I have also developed my own view as well. In my opinion, I prefer the first one. I think it benefits for students by daily homework.

The first sentence is incomplete.
I have also developed my own view as well . repeated.
I think it isbenefitsbeneficial for students by daily homework

Too much similar errors as above.

Pay attention to the grammar error, such as +ing. Also, try to make the sentences more flexible.
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129  
Mar 29, 2011   #3
Yeah, that first sentence has a problem:
The topic of whether teachers should give homework to students every day is controversial due to its complexity.

Some people think it is necessary while others don't agree about it.

Besides , teachers may ask some questions which are easy to misunderstanding misunderstand.

After finishing these questions, students could figure out the problem they have and remember it.

On the other hand, doing daily homework can push students to study. In general, there are many decade students in a class, teacher can't supervise their students at the same time. One of the ... good.

On another hand, it ... ---You already used "on the other hand," so use a different phrase...
It is also true that homework causes students to study in groups.
:-) Practice these corrections!


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