Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. Which point of view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.
People attend University
for many reasons. For example,to achieve goals, whether it be a new experience, education to increase knowledge, career preparation and etcor prepare for a career. All of these goals become more attainable when the students attend class. First of all, When students are present at lecture or in class, they can get more knowledge. To be more precise ly, the lecture which is instructed by professor, whose knowledge pertaining to passing the class is valuable. It makes it hard to achieve educational goals if a student wont make the effort to attend and pass the class. The Professor can also inspires students to want to learn more. For instance, when I took "peoples of Africa" class, our professor shared with his experience and it was so interesting and motivated a lot of students to learn more about this region. Albeit, Our professor also gave us a chance to go toon fillfield trips, I am sure which providing a life-long memory. Second of all, Compulsory classes allow students to develop their social and communication skills. For example, studying in a team-work environment will help students to cooperate with the other students. Also, it gives opportunity to learn how to listen and respect others opinions. Furthermore, since all of these skills are useful in the workplace, it would be a good chance to prepare students to their future careers.
Last but not least, another reason that classes should be mandatory is to experience both motivation and competition source. While being required to attend classes, you would be able to work with other students and
for sure there will be experience competition among them. As result, it will lead to success and achievement of goals.
To sum up, having three reasons which are valuable knowledge, career preparation and rich experience allows me to believe that attendance must be compulsory.
Good ideas here that i expanded on to give an idea of how an essay should flow. begin with your thesis(main idea) then explain your idea, then sum up. I personally don't care for "first of all, second of all" so i edited them out... the next paragraph is sufficient to explaining that you are moving on to your next point. :)