Thank you for your candor in describing your weaknesses. I'm sure everyone will be kind and recognize that you are doing your best to make up for deficits that are not your fault.
In recent years cellular phones have become a widespread epidemic in the world of technology and entertainment.
Epidemic? Are you sure that's the word you want? If the tone is to be neutral, this transgresses that rule because "epidemic" has a very negative connotation.
Punctuation is a problem. For example:
Over the past decade
, cell phones have gone through numerous technological advances. These developments have left some consumers wondering
, "w hat will they think of next
?"While other are more concerned with whether or not technology is leaving us with a little to much power at our finger tips?
This is a sentence fragment. Also, the question mark is not warranted.
I'll let others jump in with other suggestions and fixes.