Nowadays, money become very important tool to live in the globe . Earning money become easy for some people so they can save for future. While it is difficult for others .In this essay I will write about the reasons and my personal statement will be given before conclusion traced.
We must acknowledge that money significant for delay need. Any person has family should have at least fix income to help his member to survive. Nothing free recently we have to pay for everything. For example, food, education, health and other essential needs .
In addition, looking to the factors of spending money, many people love traveling therefore they have to spend more for this hobbit. And they prefer spending money and enjoying my life instead of saving for unknown future . Add to this some people spend their money in buying expensive cars. Moreover, luxury house.
Nevertheless, we have some other people who believe in future .They always keep saving for unexpected expenses .let's face it, high percentage of people faced some difficultly in their health when they grow up in their age. So they are need money for treatment .Some are saving for their kind schools expenses and other needs.
In my point of view and personal experience, I have balance between spending money and saving it .Because both of them required to be in save side.
To sum up, people should put in their consideration that spending money good thing for current situation to cover their needs. However they have to learn saving for future to manage all unexpected expenses.
Well, it is also better if you included the prompt in your essay for us to read. Then we exactly know what it is expecting from you. I guess this essay is Agree/ Disagree type.
eddies [Contributor]
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