I'm sorry but, there were a lot of mistakes in the first paragraph and I stopped reading it.
if you see the mistakes, help correct them!
Here we go:
Oh, wait a minute! I see that Kurogashi came through. Nice job, you are great!
I'll work on that version some more:
The years of a child involve interactions between them and their environment. One of the most important factors in their environment is the people around them. It is this factor that decides the academic success of a ...
Nowadays in contemporary societies, children seem
to spend a lot of time in school; therefore, they ...
...the beginning of each year, a frie
nd of mine and I share our common goals and study methods. And we consistently...
For example, if a parent
who usually monitors the progress of a child in their studies,
supports them in their future career, and talk to them about how important studying is, the child will one day become successful.
In conclusion, a child's success
depends on several factors. But, a crucial factor has to be people and who can influence a child -- friends and family.
:-)