my writing skills leave much to be desired.
You are doing well!! Don't worry. The important thing is to keep on reading about the subject that you want to master.... nutrition? Meditation? Literature? Keep practicing by reading and writing; don't worry about the errors.
Progress is a process:
The word "progress" usually refers the world's process of becoming incredibly better in the terms of social life, science, history, technology, modernization and so forth.
For me personally progress has played ...
As you practice reading andwriting and speaking, you will get good at knowing when to use the word "the":
Thanks to the Internet we can ...
I recently discovered that apparently it is possible even to watch movies online! --- excellent sentence!!
Get rid of extra words:
in order to conclude, with I would say that I don't think we ever ...
I will assign you homework: Read my favorite book. It is called On Writing: A Memoir of the Craft. You have a lot of potential as a writer!