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TOEFL; WITHOUT A GOOD SENSE OF HUMOR LIFE WILL BE NOT ANY DIFFERENT FROM DEATH


Enas30 1 / 1 1  
Sep 17, 2013   #1
DO YOU AGREE OF DISAGREE: A GOOD SENSE OF HUMOR IS ONE OF THE MOST IMPORTANT HUMAN QUALITIES

I believe that human qualities depend basically on sense of humor to make the person acceptable where ever or whenever he go. Let's imagine that there is a very good, kind, smart, and handsome person went to a party and he was alone and didn't know any one of the guests, except the party owner of course, this person would not be able to connect and will not be acceptable by the other guests unless he had a very good sense of humor to attract them. Of course, he will attract them by his outfit but how will throw them away when he speaks. Imagine this same person was working in a position where he was obligated to treat with a lot of kinds of people all day long. I think for the first day he will attract all the customers to speak with him and to ask him to help them. Now imagine one of them is trying to joke with him and his response was rough and aggressive do you think the customer will ever treat with him again?! I don't think so.

The same person in his family how he (or she) could practice his normal life with his children, his wife or his naboghers. I think the life with him will be so difficult, i.e. he won't understand jokes, he won't be able to say jokes, and even he tried joking and kidding with others it will be so silly, so he will be alone at home, at work or anywhere else.

In my opinion, the sense of humor is the mother quality of the human qualities and without it life will not have any different from death, because there will no value to eat, work, play or sleep without hope. The hope is the next result to humor because man king always hope to defeat the life difficults and go to the "HAPPYENDINGS" which depends, mainly, on laugh and humor sense.
Kalyn17992 9 / 19 1  
Sep 18, 2013   #2
I believe that human qualities depend basically on sense of humor to make the person acceptable where ever or whenever he go

....make the people...
i think you should use "people" instead of "person" . person is a singular noun
hope this helps


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