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Older people lived with their children - multifarious Nursing Home Advantages eddies
Mar 30, 2014
TOEFL: Keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagr sntinn
Mar 29, 2014
Television advertising directed toward young children give your opinion eddies
Mar 29, 2014
Closed: IELTS: age percentage of people in Yemen and Italy between 2000 and 2050

9 - Thanks your suggestion.

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puman - Mar 21, 2014
puman
Mar 28, 2014
"a survey of children's activities" - IELTS writing task 1 sample: Pie Graph chichiua
Mar 28, 2014
advertising issues; regulate a law prohibiting unacceptable advertising dumi
Mar 28, 2014
small town vs big city - pros and cons dumi
Mar 28, 2014
'money literacy'; Learning with a teacher or learning alone that you prefer. Pahan
Mar 28, 2014
Painter, director, writter, photographers - creatives artists, expressing their own ideas. Pahan
Mar 28, 2014
IELTS: The same money for sport activities or libraries? They assemble money from learner eddies
Mar 28, 2014
IELTS: Marriages are bigger and more expensive nowadays than in the past. Why is this? dumi
Mar 28, 2014
Closed: IELTS: Studying at university to be successful? Yes, but it is not main decisive element. MisterWandering
Mar 27, 2014
IELTS; The ability of students in the areas of literacy and numeracy have declined eddies
Mar 27, 2014
Eassy For Toefl: computer for students vs books for library sntinn
Mar 27, 2014
IELTS: High price of petrol as sollution the traffic and pollution;the Nederland crystal941
Mar 27, 2014
IELTS International sporting games are essential in releasing patriotic emotions; safe way eddies
Mar 27, 2014
Traditional and International - Why do we need music? 'essence of individuals and society' dumi
Mar 27, 2014
IELTS exam; changes to the educational system; good & bad effects dumi
Mar 27, 2014
Closed: IELTS-GT: it's important for parents to teach their children about the importance of money dumi
Mar 27, 2014
IELTS: Expenditure on fast food by Income groups in UK; hamburger and pizza dumi
Mar 27, 2014
IELTS: Studying in univ. or finding a job? High education prospects a successful career dumi
Mar 27, 2014
IELTS: International imprisonment level report; 'USA recorded the top notch level rate' SHanafi
Mar 27, 2014
Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share. hunglk
Mar 26, 2014
some high school leavers choose to work/travel; a matter of personal preference

5 - Thank for all. I hope to see many of you in my future post!!!

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zztrieuman - Mar 26, 2014
zztrieuman
Mar 26, 2014
TOEFL evalution -PEOPLE LEARN THINGS FROM LISTENING OTHER, SELF- EXPERIENCE, READING. sandipsinh
Mar 26, 2014
IELTS: BENEFICIAL INTERNET AND TRAFFIC CONGESTION; encyclopedia of human

3 - Please pay attention to grammar issue

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hunglk - Mar 26, 2014
tiaDS
Mar 26, 2014
IELTS Task II : Pros and cons of Credit card SHanafi
Mar 26, 2014
Power of advertising; My two friends who owned well serviced car bought the same car dumi
Mar 26, 2014
Essay For Toefl: taking risk vs careful planning eddies
Mar 26, 2014
Air Force Academy - Ethical Dilemma essay; The following story was real and not fabricated ramshah
Mar 26, 2014
Toefl essay - stress are relieved by people by reading, gardening, exercising. ramshah
Mar 26, 2014
IELTS Writing: Qualities for Becoming Successful Can't Learn At A University? eddies
Mar 26, 2014
My most memorable experience: 21st November, just after my birthday; Colony Cricket League dumi
Mar 26, 2014
IELTS:Working people are busy -don't have time for family and friends; severe consequences eddies
Mar 26, 2014
IELTS :Distance-learning cannot bring the benefits that traditional colleges offer; Agree?

4 - .... this fragment sentence needs a main sentence.

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anselzhang - Mar 4, 2014
SHanafi
Mar 25, 2014
IELTS: the high sales of goods & power of advertising - 'what we buy is up to ourselves' SHanafi
Mar 25, 2014
TOEFL IBT: Why people want to move to big cities to settle down?

3 - Thank you very much!

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luonghao - Apr 10, 2013
luonghao
Mar 25, 2014
IELTS: Water Cycle from the ocean to air and to the Earth surface SHanafi
Mar 25, 2014
IELTS exam: studying at university is the best route to reach successful career SalomeA
Mar 25, 2014
Closed: Begin learning EL at primary rather than secondary school?Advantages outweigh disadvantage Pahan
Mar 25, 2014
IELTS: Elderly Population in three different countries: Japan, Sweden and USA SHanafi
Mar 25, 2014
Politicians are the most important people on earth! -- They have the final say dumi
Mar 25, 2014
Toefl essay - Media invading public figures privacy. dumi
Mar 25, 2014
People who do not prefer change are pessimistic and who like changes- optimistic dumi
Mar 25, 2014
IELTS: Living in modern Apartment or Traditional House - support your choice dumi
Mar 25, 2014
TOEFL: Why do you think people visit museums? dumi
Mar 25, 2014
There are many different types of music in the world today. 'enjoy, pleasure' dumi
Mar 24, 2014
IELTS: Pros and Cons - advertisement - has become integral part of modern society's life dumi
Mar 24, 2014
IELTS TASK 2 : Young people now have a lot of pressure . eddies
Mar 24, 2014
Ielts Task 2:Our cities are noisier than ever before. Why is this so, and what can be done eddies
Mar 24, 2014
IELTS: highly qualif graduates without employment are frequent, why? cutthroat competition Pahan
Mar 24, 2014
IELS - A cheap air travel? advantage/ disadvantage; overweight - safety considerations

15 - Thanks so much.I will pay attention to it carefully.

Writing Feedback
BINGBINGLIANG - Mar 23, 2014
BINGBINGLIANG
Mar 24, 2014
internet is the great innovation in our lives; be selective to see many effects eddies
Mar 24, 2014
Watching television is one of the simplest ways to relax after hard working time noriaki
Mar 24, 2014
TOEFL Essay: How does advertising influence people's behaviour? Pahan
Mar 24, 2014
IELTS - Crime in UK; percentage of criminality of British people in different age/gender eddies
Mar 24, 2014
Toefl essay - work done by hand or machinery. Agree or disagree. Pahan
Mar 24, 2014
Toefl essay: Should we only watch movies that can teach us something about real life?

3 - Ok, let me also help you with intro :) Let's have a look at your prompt -...

Writing Feedback
Spookysnoopy - Mar 23, 2014
Pahan
Mar 24, 2014
Closed: [TOEFL] The internet provides people with a lot of valuable info or problems? Pahan
Mar 24, 2014
(IELTS essay) It is becoming more and more difficult to escape the influence of the media Bob brother
Mar 24, 2014
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