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Various genre of music surrounds people; Traditional more important that modern eddies
Apr 2, 2014
conventional medicine, is it safe or not?

4 - thanks dumi! :) im happy you like my essay! hahahaha!

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codeblue - Mar 31, 2014
codeblue
Apr 2, 2014
Article: "What do you want to when you grow up?" medical student

3 - Thanks!

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Saqib - Mar 31, 2014
Saqib
Apr 2, 2014
Advantages outweigh the disadvantages to starting foreign language early dumi
Apr 2, 2014
Closed: Earning of money differs from person to person; 'money doesn't give success' dumi
Apr 2, 2014
Many teachers assign homework to students every day; 'not important in Physics' dumi
Apr 2, 2014
Closed: IELTS-GT: Women in Navy or Air Forces - should not be allowed; instead: career, children Naveed786
Apr 2, 2014
Closed: [TOEFL Essay] movies or television influence - revolutionized the people Jaanu
Apr 2, 2014
Closed: policies to deter negative effects; Urbanization is an important ongoing process

4 - thanks for your suggestions

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monshri1979 - Mar 21, 2014
monshri1979
Apr 2, 2014
IELTS: Some people enjoy change, new experiences. Changing our habits is making us better ridwan
Apr 2, 2014
Closed: 'Today 's children are tomorrow's citizen' - good members of SOCIETY

4 - Thank you eddie

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ammus1 - Apr 1, 2014
ammus1
Apr 1, 2014
hard work vs luck - become the person what you are trying to be, not by the luck eddies
Apr 1, 2014
WHAT SHOULD YOU CONSIDER TO SET A NEW BUSINESS ?

3 - B1 speaking : what should you consider to set up a new business

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Ngochieu - Mar 31, 2014
Ngochieu
Apr 1, 2014
IELTS: Some people like to do only what they already do well. Eva Novita Sari
Apr 1, 2014
Toefl essay. Computer vs book - chose to buy computers eddies
Apr 1, 2014
IELTS; electricity volume for two major seasons in UK Pahan
Apr 1, 2014
IELTS: Children to learn about money via parents - educate about the significance of money Arun0506
Apr 1, 2014
Televised talent shows is not only to entertain Misnariah Idrus
Apr 1, 2014
It is better to have a broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one dumi
Apr 1, 2014
Closed: price of petrol vs traffic & pollution - temporary solution dumi
Apr 1, 2014
IELTS: Who concerns issues more? Young people or elderly people?; equally concerned dumi
Apr 1, 2014
IELTS: unemployment rate comparaison between US and Japan mar.93-mar.99 Mowonight
Apr 1, 2014
IELTS: CHALLENGE - some people are attracted to dangerous sports/ activities dumi
Apr 1, 2014
IELTS: Prediction of world population growth - 4000 millions of people in 2040. Mowonight
Apr 1, 2014
Toefl - Is technology creating single world culture? fights for culture & belief dumi
Apr 1, 2014
Closed: Toefl - 'members can learn more' - live a life without any burdens dumi
Apr 1, 2014
Closed: Toefl - teacher evaluation; students can learn more dumi
Apr 1, 2014
Technology become Culture - big effect to our lives fikri
Apr 1, 2014
Teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Good Idea? Knowledge vs Money. Eva Novita Sari
Apr 1, 2014
Closed: IELTS: languages die out annually. The greatest victims: history and culture

2 -  Thanks for your suggestions.

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puman - Mar 31, 2014
puman
Mar 31, 2014
IELTS; Fish and Meat consumption in European country between 1979 and 2004 tiaDS
Mar 31, 2014
If I am to travel 40 miles distance, I would choose the train

5 - you don't have a verb too long sentence. try to rewrite this sentence....

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oktavianna - Mar 21, 2014
tiaDS
Mar 31, 2014
IELTS PART 1 - Car ownership in Britain 1971-2007 tiaDS
Mar 31, 2014
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: full-time education for young people 18 and below; agree or disagree eddies
Mar 31, 2014
Closed: IELTS: best way to improve public health; lack of exercise Pahan
Mar 31, 2014
Some people prefer to eat meals at home. Other people would rather eat at restaurants. eddies
Mar 31, 2014
IELTS: people's weight has increased, levels of health decreased; Solusions Pahan
Mar 31, 2014
It's better to enjoy your money save it for the future? Family-Fixed Income eddies
Mar 31, 2014
Closed: Ielts: The population growth! each period of time had different leaders eddies
Mar 31, 2014
IELTS Essay: teachers lesson vs other sources; 'one click of a button' eddies
Mar 30, 2014
money as a cause of happiness; the important necessity in human life SHanafi
Mar 30, 2014
Commonly understood; Game are as important for adults as they are for children. dumi
Mar 30, 2014
IELTS: Japanese tourists in Australia - numbers went from 0% to 6%

7 -  Yep. I'll have some other tries later. Thanks a lot dumi.

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Mowonight - Mar 29, 2014
Mowonight
Mar 30, 2014
IELTS: Why study at formal educations is so important? for diploma and better future. dumi
Mar 30, 2014
IELTS: Popular events are essential; world sport events provide positive waves eddies
Mar 30, 2014
Closed: IELTS: Energy consumption by fuel in the USA (1980-2030) nuclear, solar, wind, hydro power dumi
Mar 30, 2014
IELTS: Boys and Girls leisure activities; computer games, netball, basketball dumi
Mar 30, 2014
Early children formal education - kids need to play making them happy dumi
Mar 30, 2014
Older people lived with their children - multifarious Nursing Home Advantages eddies
Mar 30, 2014
TOEFL: Keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagr sntinn
Mar 29, 2014
Television advertising directed toward young children give your opinion eddies
Mar 29, 2014
Closed: IELTS: age percentage of people in Yemen and Italy between 2000 and 2050

9 - Thanks your suggestion.

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puman - Mar 21, 2014
puman
Mar 28, 2014
"a survey of children's activities" - IELTS writing task 1 sample: Pie Graph chichiua
Mar 28, 2014
small town vs big city - pros and cons dumi
Mar 28, 2014
IELTS: The same money for sport activities or libraries? They assemble money from learner eddies
Mar 28, 2014
Closed: IELTS: Studying at university to be successful? Yes, but it is not main decisive element. MisterWandering
Mar 27, 2014
IELTS; The ability of students in the areas of literacy and numeracy have declined eddies
Mar 27, 2014
Eassy For Toefl: computer for students vs books for library sntinn
Mar 27, 2014
IELTS: High price of petrol as sollution the traffic and pollution;the Nederland crystal941
Mar 27, 2014
IELTS International sporting games are essential in releasing patriotic emotions; safe way eddies
Mar 27, 2014
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