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The international community should reduce or eliminate the debts of the world's poorest countries

2 - It is not enough to simply be against the idea presented when developing the Writer's opinion. Review the required...

Writing Feedbackdotranuyennhi - Feb 20, 2024 / Holt - Feb 23, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - In the modern world it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people

2 - While the restatement of the topic is aligned with the original discussion, there is a problem with the writer's...

Writing Feedbackcardilua - Feb 20, 2024 / Holt - Feb 22, 2024
There are more workers working from home and more students studying from home

2 - Pick one. You cannot use both in an actual test. This sort of undecided writing will cost you...

Writing FeedbackAyan Nguyen - Feb 19, 2024 / Holt - Feb 22, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - WORK AND STUDY FROM HOME

2 - The paraphrasing for the original topic is acceptable. The writer understood the writing task as can be seen from...

Writing Feedbackngducng - Feb 17, 2024 / Holt - Feb 22, 2024
Most people do not care enough about environmental issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

2 - You have not met the 250 word count for the presentation. This will be an automatic failing score essay...

Writing Feedbackastu123 - Feb 17, 2024 / Holt - Feb 22, 2024
Ielts writing task 2- animal experimentation

2 - While your essay meets the word requirement of 250 words, and you will avoid penalties based on word count,...

Writing Feedbackgalaxy94 - Feb 16, 2024 / Holt - Feb 22, 2024
IELTS Writing Task 2: Online and traditional classroom

3 - In the conclusion you need to summarize the information that you have analyzed and give your personal opinion about...

Writing FeedbackRandomStudent - Feb 16, 2024 / cardilua - Feb 20, 2024
The graph below gives information on the performance of a train company in October and November

2 - When you mention the type of image, it would be best for your score if you immediately include information...

Writing Feedbackhaminhuynh - Feb 14, 2024 / Holt - Feb 18, 2024
[IELTS TASK 1] Numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum before and after it was refurbished

2 - The most ideal word count for a task 1 essay would be 175 words. That would assure you of...

Writing Feedbacksnackara - Feb 13, 2024 / Holt - Feb 18, 2024
[IELTS WRITING TASK 1] Percentage of households

4 - For the overview: I recommend you to look at the tendency of all keys, you should also be able...

Writing Feedbacksandy21709 - Jan 31, 2024 / caohuyen93 - Feb 18, 2024
Benefit of playing video games. Give reasons and examples

3 - When you write an essay, do not use contractions ( don't) , and after "such as", you do not...

Writing Feedbackannchf - Feb 5, 2024 / caohuyen93 - Feb 18, 2024
Computers are being used more and more in education. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages

3 - The question simple asks you to name and explain some pros and cons of the situation. So you should...

Writing FeedbackErik79 - Feb 6, 2024 / caohuyen93 - Feb 15, 2024
The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

5 - Not only indicating the start and the end year, you should also mention the measurement in the introduction, which...

Writing Feedbackmylinh3001 - Jan 20, 2024 / snackara - Feb 13, 2024
Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online.

4 - Since this is a single opinion essay, you should concentrate on your opinion. You can consider other sides' arguments,...

Writing FeedbackLouis Tran - Jan 24, 2024 / snackara - Feb 13, 2024
[TASK2] As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. AGREE OR DISAGREE?

3 - Since this is a single opinion essay, you should concentrate in your opinion. You can consider other sides' arguments,...

Writing Feedbackchloepham - Jan 30, 2024 / snackara - Feb 13, 2024
[WRITING IELTS TASK 2] Topic Social

3 - You should paraphrase the topic to improve your LR score. Take the introduction for example: People's reveling in entertainment...

Writing Feedbackmeadow - Feb 7, 2024 / snackara - Feb 13, 2024
Women like shopping, some are even shopping addicted. State your points of view

2 - I am not sure why you are using an unrelated historical viewpoint for this discussion. You are expected to...

Writing Feedbackleanbinh - Feb 8, 2024 / Holt - Feb 9, 2024
A noticeable lack of students opting for science subjects at universities

2 - Your Task Accuracy score will not meet the preliminary passing standards. While you did write a pretty acceptable restatement,...

Writing Feedbackruakahan - Feb 8, 2024 / Holt - Feb 9, 2024
The bar chart below shows the estimated world illiteracy rates for regions and by gender in the past

2 - While you have written more than the required word count to get major scoring points for your presentation, the...

Writing FeedbackMayrie - Feb 6, 2024 / Holt - Feb 9, 2024
Writing task 1 (The process of growing and preparing pineapples and pineapple products)

3 - I suppose that if the task doesn't explicit clearly the number of stages, you should not infer them yourself...

Writing FeedbackNgocmai0311 - Jan 30, 2024 / ruakahan - Feb 7, 2024
As countries progress, there is a trend towards living alone or in smaller family units

2 - A clear question was asked as a part of the writing guide. You are expected to provide a...

Writing Feedbackruakahan - Feb 3, 2024 / Holt - Feb 7, 2024
Gothic story - dont get off the train

2 - A gothic story should engage the senses of the reader from the start. The sense of dread, terror, fear,...

Writing Feedbacksmichalo - Feb 2, 2024 / Holt - Feb 7, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Today more people are overweight than ever before...

2 - Do not ever give an attestation to the truthfulness or falsity of the given opinion. That is never...

Writing Feedbackcaohuyen93 - Feb 1, 2024 / Holt - Feb 7, 2024
Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty.

2 - One of the major deductions that will be applied to this essay is your lack of proper sentence writing....

Writing Feedbacklunaforthej - Jan 31, 2024 / Holt - Feb 7, 2024
The pictures below show how tea is produced. They also illustrate the process of making a cup of tea

2 - You are well within the word count to receive maximum scoring consideration for each section. Your explanations are coherent...

Writing Feedbackvovietnhatanh17 - Jan 30, 2024 / Holt - Feb 7, 2024
Young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school

2 - Please follow the expected paragraph formatting for the task 2 essay. The proper formatting has 5 sentences in each...

Writing FeedbackGbao1212 - Jan 30, 2024 / Holt - Feb 6, 2024
[IELTS WRITING TASK 1] Average content of sodium, saturated fats and sugar

2 - Indicate the number of pie charts and what each pie chart records as information for the presentation. It...

Writing FeedbackWilliam0809202 - Jan 30, 2024 / Holt - Feb 6, 2024
Ielts writing task 2 - The Antarctic ozone hole

2 - This compressed statement will automatically earn this essay a failing score. You have not correctly identified the number...

Writing Feedbackritazhang - Jan 30, 2024 / Holt - Feb 6, 2024
Film stars and celebrities often share their views on public matters

2 - There are 2 things you have to bear in mind when developing your task 2 essay. The first is...

Writing Feedbackkvy - Jan 28, 2024 / Holt - Jan 29, 2024
The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree ?

2 - You only wrote 212 words. That is an automatic failing essay score. That is because the minimum count is...

Writing FeedbackAndy Lee - Jan 28, 2024 / Holt - Jan 28, 2024
TASK 2 IETLS WRITING ON EDUCATION

2 - You are not discussing the essay based on the correct task requirement. The question was, if this is a...

Writing FeedbackLydia65 - Jan 27, 2024 / Holt - Jan 28, 2024
Some companies block their employees from using social media networks and websites such as facebook.

2 - It is important that you are consistent in your response presentation. That means, allowing yourself to defend only one...

Writing Feedbacktuanchill - Jan 26, 2024 / Holt - Jan 28, 2024
ยท TASK 2: Work from home You should spend about 40 minutes on this task

2 - Your prompt restatement is a mix of the original prompt information and your personal point of view. Avoid presenting...

Writing FeedbackQuynhNhu512 - Jan 26, 2024 / Holt - Jan 28, 2024
Should parents control their child's free time?

4 - "I understand the points you're trying to convey to the reader. However, your opening sentence could be improved to...

Writing FeedbackSinnubuyaaa - Jan 21, 2024 / alizarincrimsons - Jan 27, 2024
Some people enjoy working alone. Others would rather work in a group. What is your preference?

3 - You have the idea for the essay. However, your direction in this essay only focuses on the reasons rather...

Writing Feedbacktyratw4 - Jan 14, 2024 / alizarincrimsons - Jan 27, 2024
What problems do children face in the age of social media?

5 - Thank you so much. Could you correct my post ?...

Writing Feedbackpth2024 - Jan 17, 2024 / pth2024 - Jan 25, 2024
The table below gives information about some of the world's most studied languages.

4 - You are generalizing for the most part. Remember the format: Intro-overview-details. You can only generalise in overview but not...

Writing Feedbacktharo - Jan 19, 2024 / Mochi_Krystal - Jan 24, 2024
people today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out . What are the causes and solution

4 - @buitiendung i think you have to be more clear and distinct with your points and make sure all your...

Writing Feedbackbuitiendung - Jan 16, 2024 / triplej - Jan 24, 2024
Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh its disadvantages?

2 - Local what? The idea presentation is incomplete. The subject is missing. Please remember that if you think in...

Writing Feedbacktuunhi01 - Jan 24, 2024 / Holt - Jan 24, 2024
Foreign visitors should pay more than local people

2 - Do not exaggerate when stating the original topic. There is no heated controversy, there is only a public...

Writing FeedbackChanminanh - Jan 24, 2024 / Holt - Jan 24, 2024
IELTS WRITTING TASK 2 : With the rise of the ebooks comes the decline in paper books

2 - Well, you only met the requirements of the writing task halfway. The score for this presentation can only be...

Writing FeedbackLinhw - Jan 23, 2024 / Holt - Jan 24, 2024
IELTS Writing task 2: Fewer and fewer people today write by hand using a pen, pencil or brush.

2 - This is your personal opinion. It is not an accurate representation of the original prompt. Being your writer's...

Writing Feedbackcaohuyen93 - Jan 23, 2024 / Holt - Jan 24, 2024
Some children spend hours everyday on their smartphones. Reasons, positive or negative development?

3 - @hbcrosese I think you should include some positive arguments about the use of smartphones by children, such as how...

Writing Feedbackhbcrose - Jan 21, 2024 / sankook - Jan 23, 2024
TASK 2 was it good? :)Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier

4 - @Kaypea The ideas are all clear and useful, but you should consider more abt your writting construction, which you...

Writing FeedbackKaypea - Jan 6, 2024 / Linhw - Jan 23, 2024
Some people think that students who perform better in school should be rewarded.

2 - You cannot say that the statement made in the presentation is true. That is because the first paragraph is...

Writing FeedbackDuckie2 - Jan 20, 2024 / Holt - Jan 20, 2024
In some cultures, children are often told that thay can achieve anything if they try hard enough.

2 - There is no need to include this in the summary paragraph. You are not being asked to give...

Writing FeedbackTOM PARKER - Jan 18, 2024 / Holt - Jan 20, 2024
Some people think that schools should choose students according to their academic abilities

2 - The opening statement will recieve a failing score. You have not properly restated the public opinions and there is...

Writing FeedbackTNhi2003 - Jan 17, 2024 / Holt - Jan 20, 2024
A noticeable lack of students opting for science subjects at universities is observed

2 - You will lose TA points for simply repeating the writing questions instead of creating a writer's opinion based...

Writing FeedbackANDYBAO123 - Jan 17, 2024 / Holt - Jan 20, 2024
IELTS Task 2- children spend hours every day on their smartphones

2 - While the English language used in the presentation is not perfect, it is acceptable enough to receive good GRA...

Writing Feedbackg1131692 - Jan 17, 2024 / Holt - Jan 20, 2024
IELTS Writing Task 1 (Line graph) - The money spent by British parents on their children's sport

2 - A chart is different from a line graph. The original prompt uses the term "chart" to describe the...

Writing Feedbackuyen_465 - Jan 16, 2024 / Holt - Jan 20, 2024
A writting task 1 about some changes in an area

2 - Incorrect image identifier. This is a map illustration, not a graph. this mistake in image reference will affect...

Writing FeedbackPhongbeo12 - Jan 16, 2024 / Holt - Jan 20, 2024
Allowing children to use phones at the school

2 - Well, the discussion approach could be better. For these types of comparison essays, the examiner gives extra points for...

Writing FeedbackRahma20 - Jan 15, 2024 / Holt - Jan 20, 2024
Some people think the government funding should not be used for supporting art and culture

2 - Do not exaggerate your response. Know when to use a measured response to the question and when not...

Writing Feedbackkhanhan - Jan 14, 2024 / Holt - Jan 20, 2024
IELTS-TASK2: Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.

3 - @Holt Thank you for your help, Im truly appreciative and I will find ways to fix it. Just one...

Writing Feedbackcaohuyen93 - Dec 28, 2023 / caohuyen93 - Jan 18, 2024
IELTS task 1 report on Dairy products

3 - @Holt I want to say thank you so much for your assessment. Would it be fine if I create...

Writing Feedbacksummerchilld - Jan 13, 2024 / summerchilld - Jan 14, 2024
Visitors to Ashdown Museum: IELTS - Describe table and charts

2 - What was the rate for the extremely unfulfilled visitors? You did not indicate the percentages for that section of...

Writing Feedbackthienji - Jan 14, 2024 / Holt - Jan 14, 2024
IELTS WRITTING TASK 2 Question: some people argue that university students should be free to choose

2 - Your first sentence in the first paragraph is misleading. There is no fiery discussion sparked across the globe. A...

Writing FeedbackLinhw - Jan 13, 2024 / Holt - Jan 14, 2024
IELTS what do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community?

3 - Your introduction is irrelevant to the topic - you are supposed to paraphase the topic in your own words,...

Writing Feedbacknguyendf - Jan 7, 2024 / Lyth - Jan 13, 2024
BRAZILIAN EMIGRATION (essay for an exam)

3 - @Holt Hi, Holt! Thank you very much for your feedback. I carefully read your response and I will try...

Writing Feedbackgmt16 - Jan 12, 2024 / gmt16 - Jan 13, 2024
Modern technology makes people less creative?

3 - @Holt thank you so much, but can you elaborate on more about anchor topics? i actually find this term...

Writing Feedbackwalk0nastarry9 - Jan 7, 2024 / walk0nastarry9 - Jan 13, 2024

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