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I strongly believe that life in a big city is extremely enjoyable 6 - Limetta: From my point of view, it is much more convenient to live in a big city. This is... Writing Feedback Limetta - Apr 22, 2013	dumi Apr 26, 2013
TOEFL ;Taking enough time to do things is better than finishing in a hurry 5 - terryoftommorw: Living in modern world, many people live lives rushing behind time. Bankers want to spend every second on gaining... Writing Feedback terryoftommorw - Apr 21, 2013	dumi Apr 26, 2013
What is your idea about children's studying at boarding school? 2 - Orkhan_O: Boarding school is a relevant example in this pattern.................. Before coming to this point, it's better if you introduced... Writing Feedback Orkhan_O - Apr 25, 2013	dumi Apr 26, 2013
GRE Argument Essay- Skateboarders VS. Shop Owners 1 - laurelmegan: The Central Plaza store owner makes a generalized conclusion that the increase in the population of skateboarders and higher... Writing Feedback laurelmegan - Apr 26, 2013	dumi Apr 26, 2013
IELTS Essay - Teenage years are the Happiest time of life? 2 - christyzhongs: Some people think that the days attending school are the happiest time of most people's life while the others... Writing Feedback christyzhongs - Apr 25, 2013	dumi Apr 26, 2013
IELTS task 2; What is teacher's role? Should they teach academic subjects only? 2 - maruko_a2609: There is no doubt that teachers should take responsibilities for teaching students to judge right and wrong and behave... Writing Feedback maruko_a2609 - Apr 22, 2013	dumi Apr 25, 2013
British & Australian laws on criminal cases 3 - Ok, thank you for your consideration. Writing Feedback Sevocka - Apr 21, 2013	Sevocka Apr 25, 2013
IELTS Essay---No one should be allowed to work after the age of 65(Discussion) 4 - deva624: Some other people,however,are strongly believe that ......................... However, some people strongly believe that....... Writing Feedback deva624 - Apr 22, 2013	Redtape Apr 25, 2013
Memorial Day Essay Feedback 3 - saichicka39: Memorial Day Essay: "What is Memorial Day, and what does it mean to you?" Word Count Limit: 500-525... Writing Feedback saichicka39 - Apr 22, 2013	andrea94 Apr 25, 2013
Closed: IELTS; How to stay healthy in your country? Reasons & Answeres 6 - dumi: In order to stay healthy, the people in my country should be made aware of healthy eating habits and... Writing Feedback Redtape - Apr 18, 2013	Redtape Apr 25, 2013
IELTS - International Tourism becomes more common than earlier. 6 - Dear Dumi, I appreciate so much for your review and correction in my essay. It looks to me that your... Writing Feedback Jessiewyq - Apr 21, 2013	Jessiewyq Apr 24, 2013
IELTS ESSAY: Whether scientist are able to give solutions to all the problems? 6 - sakuralucia: It is widely complained that though the achievements in science and technology accelerate the pace of human civilization, it... Writing Feedback sakuralucia - Apr 22, 2013	Pahan Apr 24, 2013
Toefl Ibt- Task 2; Reasons for attending college or universities 2 - BarriosMaricel9: But I have a strong belief that most of students attend to an educational institution to build up... Writing Feedback BarriosMaricel9 - Apr 24, 2013	Pahan Apr 24, 2013
IELTS Writing Task 1:Consumer spending (Graph) 6 - dear Ahmad, thank you so much for your helpful comment ! Writing Feedback sevensea - Apr 19, 2013	sevensea Apr 24, 2013
IELTS task2 - Childen should/should not obey rules made by parents and teachers 3 - CallMeRay: I tend to agree that too much rules and instructions given to children would restrict strain their personality... Writing Feedback CallMeRay - Apr 22, 2013	dumi Apr 24, 2013
Classmates have a more important influence than parents on a child's success 5 - ningo: Some people consider that classmates have a more positive effect on a child's achievements than parents, because kids... Writing Feedback ningo - Apr 21, 2013	dumi Apr 24, 2013
IELTS task 1: Letter to the neighbors to apologize for the noise 2 - Jessiewyq: I was terribly sorry to receive your letter complaining about the noise brought from my flat last Friday night... Writing Feedback Jessiewyq - Apr 21, 2013	dumi Apr 24, 2013
Advantages of face-to-face communication 3 - so many good ideas : ) but I think the whole stucture seems to be a little unbalanced that... Writing Feedback Limetta - Apr 23, 2013	sakuralucia Apr 24, 2013
The type of class I prefer to study 5 - Fardin: won't ....Will not Fardin: it cause to learning cooperation in studying and certainly in their life...It teaches them... Writing Feedback Fardin - Apr 21, 2013	shaddy Apr 24, 2013
Closed: IELTS : Is knowledge gained from books or experiences? 4 - Thanks to all, the suggestions are helpful. dumi: Your first body para is very well presented............ You can surely write... Writing Feedback shaddy - Apr 23, 2013	shaddy Apr 24, 2013
Closed: The Absolutely True Diary of Part Time Indian School Book Essay [Year 9, Australia] 3 - Thank you very much for all your help. Now I am clear where I started losing my marks... I hope... Writing Feedback Eddie Han - Mar 23, 2013	Eddie Han Apr 24, 2013
"Who wants to be a millionaire?" - a popular TV Show 2 - alexg7g7: Charles answered the first questions with ease Charles answered the first few questions with ease. You say there... Writing Feedback alexg7g7 - Apr 21, 2013	dumi Apr 24, 2013
" The college years are the best time in a persons' life" 6 - ningo: It may be argued that the retirement years are the best time in one's life, because people are not... Writing Feedback ningo - Apr 19, 2013	dumi Apr 24, 2013
Closed: Report - production of colored paper clips. 3 - xucoi: Oh Dumi, I means the system worked at best as it can in current time. So i use as... Writing Feedback xucoi - Apr 19, 2013	dumi Apr 24, 2013
What is more important? STUDIES or LUCK? 3 - AidanaMyrzakhan You should take a very clear point of view that will help to write convincingly. For instance, There... Writing Feedback AidanaMyrzakhan - Apr 23, 2013	sanaqvi Apr 24, 2013
Punishment for misconduct of school children 1 - sanaqvi: The idea of punishment is nothing new in human community and its purpose is to deter misconduct in society.... Writing Feedback sanaqvi - Apr 24, 2013	dumi Apr 24, 2013
It's good to learn a foreign language in that foreign land ! 5 - I have edited the first sentence in the introduction. Please give it a look and let me hear your voice!... Writing Feedback ningo - Apr 21, 2013	ningo Apr 24, 2013
IELTS Task2: Essay - The best way to reduce the number of traffic accidents.. 2 - Suzy Naguib: We must acknowledge that the number of car accidents has been currently growing.............. Your topic is for traffic... Writing Feedback Suzy Naguib - Apr 23, 2013	dumi Apr 24, 2013
IELTS ESSAY- Old people are more valued than the youth? 4 - Lorica: Old and youth exist in our society as a common appearance. ............ This is a too obvious idea. You... Writing Feedback Lorica - Apr 21, 2013	dumi Apr 24, 2013
imposing strict punishment for driving can reduce road accidents. 2 - leslie17: some people think that imposing strict punishments for driving of offences can reduce road accidents. give your opinion. What's... Writing Feedback leslie17 - Apr 23, 2013	dumi Apr 24, 2013
IELTS ; Leading a Simple Life helps protect our environment? 1 - Lorica: It is inevitable and undeniable that our environment has been seriously polluted in recent years decades. ............. I... Writing Feedback Lorica - Apr 23, 2013	dumi Apr 24, 2013
IELTS, Why more people travel than before? What are the benefits? 7 - Thank you guys for all helpful advices, I'll take them into consideration~~ Writing Feedback homsai - Apr 20, 2013	homsai Apr 23, 2013
IELTS T 2 Learning a foreign language right at the primary school. 5 - mhss: of ones life. of one's life Writing Feedback mhss - Mar 26, 2013	ningo Apr 22, 2013
Do you agree that the internet has transformed lives and economies? 6 - Oh, It sounds great but I'm regreted that we didn't meet sooner :) Sri Lanka, I wish I had... Writing Feedback maruko_a2609 - Apr 11, 2013	maruko_a2609 Apr 22, 2013
Closed: Letter : Write a letter to get your coat back from your friend's place where you stay 2 - rko029: Keep up the good work :) Thanks man, stay blessed. Writing Feedback shaddy - Apr 21, 2013	shaddy Apr 22, 2013
IELTS Essay:Being a celebrity,the benifits are out weigh the problem? 2 - And later on, the movie can bring a lot of fun to our life. ----to our lives Finally, it... Writing Feedback christyzhongs - Apr 21, 2013	Lorica Apr 21, 2013
Closed: IELTS: Increase of Illiteracy rate causes and effects on society 9 - dumi: For this issue, I think the main reason is troubled families.............. In those developed countries the divorce rate is... Writing Feedback shaddy - Apr 18, 2013	shaddy Apr 21, 2013
Should non academic subjects be removed from school curriculum? 2 - carpediem: Nowadays it is widely believed that time in school should be purely devoted to academic subjects like language and... Writing Feedback carpediem - Apr 18, 2013	dumi Apr 21, 2013
Closed: IELTS: Should both parents work in a family? 2 - dumi: The people who oppose the idea of having both parents working, believe this arrangement would disturb children receiving enough... Writing Feedback shaddy - Apr 21, 2013	shaddy Apr 21, 2013
Closed: IETLS; Do you agree that it's worth spending money on space exploration? 5 - dumi: Hi Redtape, First, I have a request for you. Please post your IELTS essays under "writing feedback" category and... Writing Feedback Redtape - Apr 20, 2013	Redtape Apr 21, 2013
IELTS; Money spending on space exploration is a complete waste/ Agree or disagree? 2 - essaytest: Throughout the history of mankind, we humans have always been eager to explore the world and space around us.... Writing Feedback essaytest - Apr 21, 2013	shaddy Apr 21, 2013
The crease on my mom's forhead ; Motivation 2 - Thanks for your reply.... I was never really good at grammar:) Writing Feedback Koit - Apr 17, 2013	Koit Apr 20, 2013
IELTS General training, inviting a friend to visit your new house. 4 - 3. My cousin is getting married this Sunday and his family will move into my old house to start their... Writing Feedback homsai - Apr 20, 2013	Sunny he Apr 20, 2013
Truth is outrageous,nonacceptable & may hurts our belief; ISSUE TOPIC 1 2 - thanx sir i will correct my mistake Writing Feedback aum - Apr 19, 2013	aum Apr 20, 2013
Who is responsible for Medical Services ? 5 - Hi, Lorica, First, I would like to highlight that you IELTs essay is not long enough(only 240 words), please... Writing Feedback Lorica - Apr 19, 2013	christyzhongs Apr 20, 2013
Do you think that television programs, movies, and video games influence young people 4 - Caroline777: So we have to choose the right way for us and our children to take the benefit of what... Writing Feedback Caroline777 - Apr 18, 2013	ningo Apr 19, 2013
'understanding intercultural communication'; culture shock 3 - it's an interesting writing style.Thanks for your essays! Writing Feedback hoai - Apr 15, 2013	ningo Apr 19, 2013
IELTS; Intelligent/ Humor/ Reliable - Which one of these you look in your friend? 1 - Hi gyal, First I have a request for you :) ........... You need to provide a meaningful... Writing Feedback gyal - Apr 19, 2013	dumi Apr 19, 2013
Role of teachers with appearance of computers. 1 - Pond: There is no doubt that education and the learning process has have changed since the appearance of computers in... Writing Feedback Pond - Apr 19, 2013	dumi Apr 19, 2013
Sales of popular customer goods reflect the power of advertising? 2 - Thanks for your reply :) Writing Feedback Pond - Apr 18, 2013	Pond Apr 19, 2013
Homework is Harmful! - Why? 2 - Homework is Harmful! - Why? ............ yes it is :D ........... LOL Fajriyah: Second, students... Writing Feedback Fajriyah - Apr 14, 2013	Pahan Apr 19, 2013
IELTS- It's important to address root causes in order to reduce criminal activities! 2 - StG: On the other side of the argument, StG: On the other side of argument, punishment should fit... Writing Feedback StG - Apr 18, 2013	Pahan Apr 19, 2013
Should the government invest in early childhood education or higher education 2 - Joyceessay: The people who attend to university are in the golden period of development, and they need a lot of... Writing Feedback Joyceessay - Apr 19, 2013	Pahan Apr 19, 2013
Neighbors are the people who live near us. What are the qualities of a good neighbor? 4 - Dear friend di10di. Yes , you really did . I appreciated . Thanks very much I really have a... Writing Feedback snwr jamal - Apr 15, 2013	snwr jamal Apr 19, 2013
FACE TO FACE COMMUNICATION is a better way to communicate 3 - Thanks for your comments. They are really helpful!! :D Writing Feedback ningo - Apr 10, 2013	ningo Apr 19, 2013
It is true that the past stays in the past; Past or future 4 - Oh sorry it was my fault I did not mention it. Ok, I got your feedback. Great thanks! Writing Feedback gular - Apr 17, 2013	gular Apr 18, 2013
In many countries schools leave severe problems with student behavior. 2 - thanks alot) more suggestions please!) Writing Feedback AidanaMyrzakhan - Apr 17, 2013	AidanaMyrzakhan Apr 18, 2013
GRE argument: Super Screen Movie Production Company 2 - hjq1990: First, the occasional appearance of good movies could not represent that their whole products are good............ Your prompt does... Writing Feedback hjq1990 - Apr 11, 2013	dumi Apr 18, 2013
Impacts of modern medical science on society. 1 - Milad Mac: The sciences related to medical have facilitated the diagnosing and treatment treating of human being illnesses.... Writing Feedback Milad Mac - Apr 17, 2013	dumi Apr 18, 2013
Closed: IELTS Essay: Impact of computer usage on children. 7 - dumi: You have very good writing skills and no doubt about that. You follow a good essay structure. But, I... Writing Feedback shaddy - Apr 17, 2013	shaddy Apr 18, 2013

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