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Summary of TED The secret, social lives of bacteria (Bonnie Bassler)

4 - The microscopic organism on the earth ,contain ... => The microscopic organism on the earth that contains only few...

Writing FeedbackIfan21 - Sep 27, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Sep 27, 2016
The advertising of certain food products should be banned

6 - Hi Hoang, no worries at all we are here to share with you what we know and our expertise...

Writing Feedbackhoangduc241096 - Sep 23, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 27, 2016
THE NUMBER OF FOREIGN STUDENTS HAD INCREASED SIGNIFICANTLY AND IT HAD BEEN DOMINATED BY MALE.

4 - Hi Fauziyah. Let me help you to finalize your writing. Please, meet my note and deal with them. ...

Writing Feedbackfauziyahtami - Sep 27, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 27, 2016
Summary TED: Speak Up for Syrian People

6 - hi friend i have some suggestion to you they were there due to....... they believe...... we deserve the better...

Writing FeedbackAfdhel - Sep 27, 2016 / bismillah - Sep 27, 2016
Summary Article: Staying up late, the healthy way

2 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections The night activity such as which are study...

Writing Feedbackibal28 - Sep 27, 2016 / andika08 - Sep 27, 2016
TED summary: Steve Howard; Let's go all-in on selling sustainability

3 - Hii rizaldohabibie.. Here I give you some comments. Hope it can helps you. We are now building cities('we...

Writing Feedbackrizaldohabibie - Sep 27, 2016 / ibal28 - Sep 27, 2016
About thirty per cent of travellers each year choose learning programs to be their holiday purposes.

2 - Hi Rizaldo.. Actually, your summary is a good job. However, let me finalize this. ... common for all...

Writing Feedbackrizaldohabibie - Sep 27, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 27, 2016
The New Power Of Collaboration -TED

3 - Hi there, As far I concern, there are some grammatical issues in your summary. I suggest you to vary...

Writing FeedbackGiansy11 - Sep 26, 2016 / Iedha01 - Sep 27, 2016
Rebecca MacKinnon: We can fight terror without sacrificing our rights

2 - there are still some similarities between your work and the source vocabulary that mean you still need to show...

Writing Feedbackmdamanhuri77 - Sep 27, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 27, 2016
What happens within a procrastinator's brain and a rational decision maker's brain

4 - extremely complex and complicated to force it becomes only a sentence you may write: A write blogger who...

Writing Feedbackrosadesiana - Sep 27, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 27, 2016
TED Summary : Teach every child about food

7 - Hi there, Let me give you some inputs regarding to your summary, -Causes of death, people need revolution...

Writing Feedbackandika08 - Sep 26, 2016 / Iedha01 - Sep 27, 2016
On learning vacations the travelers may enjoy their time off by learning something new

3 - Hii Alam Baka.. i have no doubt that you are great in writing, but lemme give you some corrections.....

Writing FeedbackAlamsyah Ismail - Sep 27, 2016 / Giansy11 - Sep 27, 2016
A record audience is expected to watch tonight's presidential debate

3 - this is your sentence. on the article it is written: SOME 100m people are expected to tune in...

Writing Feedbackmdamanhuri77 - Sep 27, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 27, 2016
The development of technology, traditional skills die out, but it is pointless to keep is alive.

NEW - Technology is an important factor that affects all countries around the world in many ways, it seems that the...

Writing FeedbackHarris Lee - Sep 27, 2016 / — -
Summary TED: Let's design social media that drives real change

3 - Hi @ MFES2016 Your essay is good. I can see the idea immediately. The information is well presented...

Writing FeedbackMFES2016 - Sep 27, 2016 / wew018 - Sep 27, 2016
IELTS SUMMARY MONTH IS LEARNING VACATION

6 - Hai Bismillah You've done well, but there are several inputs for you. ... which is many people wants,such...

Writing Feedbackbismillah - Sep 27, 2016 / rasedasda24 - Sep 27, 2016
IELTS Writing Task 1 Summary TED: A project of peace painted across 50 buildings

3 - Hi Alamsyah, it's my pleasure to share. Here is my feedback. How to construct a city where had...

Writing FeedbackAlamsyah Ismail - Sep 27, 2016 / Fitri12 - Sep 27, 2016
Summary of Article - David Letterman Tackles Climate Change

2 - hi.. i have some comments for you.. David Letterman is well-known as Comedian, spread[spreading] happiness and laughter. After...

Writing FeedbackFatirtalent - Sep 27, 2016 / rizaldohabibie - Sep 27, 2016
IELTS SUMMARY TED MONTH IS NEW POWER - it is like currency

2 - Dear Salam You've done well. but there are several inputs. 1. The interested interesting of new power is...

Writing Feedbackbismillah - Sep 27, 2016 / Fatirtalent - Sep 27, 2016
The history of England Conquest

3 - Hi Pha, the followings are my humble comments In the 11th century, England had responsible twice invasions which...

Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Sep 27, 2016 / Fitri12 - Sep 27, 2016
Animals Starving in Venezuela Zoos

2 - Dear Aris You've done well, i adore the way of your writing. But, there are several inputs for me....

Writing FeedbackAris05 - Sep 27, 2016 / Fatirtalent - Sep 27, 2016
Almost one-third of travelers each year prefer learning program more than other types of vacations

2 - In recent years, surveys shows almost one-third of travelers each year more prefer choose( redoundand) learning program more ......

Writing FeedbackDioba - Sep 27, 2016 / BAMS14 - Sep 27, 2016
Youngest female airline captain' - 26-year-old Kate McWilliams

2 - hi friend i have some suggestion for making essay to be better in reading she never thought before...

Writing FeedbackUcha MSN - Sep 27, 2016 / bismillah - Sep 27, 2016
How to make work-life balance work by Nigel Marsh

2 - Nigel Marsh lays out [explained/highlighted/pointed out/came up with an idea about/described/spoke, etc. use past tense since it just a...

Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Sep 27, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 27, 2016
Comparing car theft - numbers of robbed vehicles in different countries

4 - Hi rizaldohabibie,after reading your summary, i have some suggestions, perhaps useful for you. 1.presents the information about car robbery...

Writing Feedbackrizaldohabibie - Sep 26, 2016 / Dioba - Sep 27, 2016
The best speaker must be able to present HAIL - honestly, authenticity, integrity, love

2 - instead of wrote those as two simple sentences, you may enhance your work by writing: speaking is vital...

Writing FeedbackBAMS14 - Sep 27, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 27, 2016
Make People Listen To Our Speak

2 - Hi Ucha Let me give you some advice Most of people always speak without havingmeaningfulness(meaningless) and powerfulness(powerless) ....

Writing FeedbackUcha MSN - Sep 27, 2016 / Yonathan - Sep 27, 2016
Online sales in retail sector between 2003 and 2013

4 - The pie chart presents IMPARTING KNOWLEDGE about the percentage of ... ... was followed by clothes as the...

Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Sep 25, 2016 / Ucha MSN - Sep 27, 2016
Anthony Goldbloom's new perspective on what machines can and can't do

4 - you may more effectively write :......a company which operates the cutting edge learning machine and ....... This...

Writing FeedbackIedha01 - Sep 27, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 27, 2016
Summary News from BBC: Aid reaches Madaya and other besieged towns

2 - Hello Pizarro.. Welcome to Essay Forum. I am delighted to tell you that you have been the right medium...

Writing FeedbackAfdhel - Sep 27, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 27, 2016
In this topic, the speaker talks about the idea of mastery and mind

2 - Hi @Aris05 The essay has a lot of power and I can feel it. There are some points...

Writing FeedbackAris05 - Sep 27, 2016 / wew018 - Sep 27, 2016
An Article Summary: Everything You've Heard about Alcohol being Good for You is a Lie By Elizabeth N

3 - from the structure or function, since you wrote 'as' in the beginning , you still need to add...

Writing FeedbackFitri12 - Sep 27, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 27, 2016
Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015 and predictions for 2025

2 - Hi @Yonathan Your essay is good. The information are well presented. Just consider some issues I have noticed...

Writing FeedbackYonathan - Sep 27, 2016 / wew018 - Sep 27, 2016
The number of export commodities and service from Someland in one decade

2 - Halo, you have done great I will try to give you some advice The bar chart shows (you...

Writing Feedbackrizaldohabibie - Sep 27, 2016 / fauziyahtami - Sep 27, 2016
The percentages of Bulgarian people who wished to live abroad

5 - Hi Cachaaaa Let me give you some advice.. The given bar chart givesyou could change with other vocab...

Writing FeedbackCachaaaaaaaa - Sep 26, 2016 / Sari Trisna - Sep 27, 2016
In 2015 export of dairy products had dominated comparing to other products

2 - Halo, you have done great I will try to give some advice ... exports of Someland which devided...

Writing FeedbackAlamsyah Ismail - Sep 27, 2016 / fauziyahtami - Sep 27, 2016
TED Summary Jamie Oliver Talk About Obesity and Food

3 - ... United States will die because of what they eat every day. In America, the biggest death factor is...

Writing FeedbackYonathan - Sep 22, 2016 / mdamanhuri77 - Sep 27, 2016
COMPARISON OF THE CAR THEFT IN EUROPE AND CANADA

3 - Hi bismillah. Here I left some suggestions for you, hope it can helps you. The line graph shows...

Writing Feedbackbismillah - Sep 26, 2016 / ibal28 - Sep 27, 2016
Good News: The tech to change your grandma's life is already here (Summarizing)

3 - This daycurrently and age, either mine or grandma or all grandparents across ... ... from one place to another...

Writing Feedbackzul2805_es - Sep 26, 2016 / mdamanhuri77 - Sep 27, 2016
SUMMARY TED 3 of Patti Dobrowolski - how to reach a dream

5 - hi.. i wanna suggest some advices.. Draw[drawing] a picture at our current condition and draw[drawing] a picture at...

Writing Feedbackrosadesiana - Sep 26, 2016 / rizaldohabibie - Sep 27, 2016
Summary of TED How does cancer spread through the body ? (Ivan Seah Yu Jun )

4 - Cancer has become a common problem yet because thorny problem in ... The predominant qiestionquestion comes cancer distribution ......

Writing FeedbackIfan21 - Sep 26, 2016 / mdamanhuri77 - Sep 27, 2016
Butter, margarine and other spreads consumed during 26 years timeline

3 - the highest consumption it was clearly that butter consumption rose from around 140 to 160 grams...

Writing FeedbackUcha MSN - Sep 26, 2016 / Diqon - Sep 27, 2016
Sports heroes in the field of badminton in Indonesia

3 - Hi Att, Sharing is fun, right!? The followings are my humble comments for u. Indonesian citizens cheered shortly...

Writing FeedbackAtt98 - Sep 26, 2016 / Fitri12 - Sep 27, 2016
The grade of school of Bulgarian students who were anxious to leave their country and stay abroad

2 - Hi Andika. These are my thoughts for your writing. Please, you meet my notes and deal with them. ...

Writing Feedbackandika08 - Sep 26, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 27, 2016
The percentage of Bulgarians who were expecting to live abroad, based on their education

2 - Hi Eva. Let me help you to finalize your writing. In this moment, I only concentrate to your contents...

Writing Feedbackeve01 - Sep 26, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 27, 2016
From 1981 to 2007 butter was the most popular spread that was consumed by people

2 - Between 1981 and 1986, butter consumption rose from around 140 to a peak of 160 gramsTHAT IS NOT MATCH...

Writing FeedbackSari Trisna - Sep 26, 2016 / BAMS14 - Sep 26, 2016
The rank of education of Bulgaria citizens who chose to live in another country

3 - hallo there are few advice for you Base on bar chart, the highest percentage of education rank to...

Writing FeedbackBekuk22 - Sep 26, 2016 / BAMS14 - Sep 26, 2016
Essay on: Academic Cheating

3 - Need help with cause and effect of cheating on a college exam Hi. I have to write ...

Writing FeedbackTeddyp2006 - Oct 26, 2006 / Getty25 - Sep 26, 2016
IELTS Task 2 - surveillance technologies provide individual tracking information

2 - Since early 21 century surveillance ... Governments in this case aim [...] those undercover observation .Its an opinion discussion...

Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Sep 25, 2016 / Mayank7g - Sep 26, 2016
Job interview just a piece of cake

2 - Hi Giansy here are my suggestions ==> the answers (response) they should give of the questions (along the...

Writing FeedbackGiansy11 - Sep 26, 2016 / rosadesiana - Sep 26, 2016
U.S Meat & Poultry Consumption, Per Capita, Boneless By Species - Writing Task 1

2 - Hi fatirtalent, I made some corrections which I think you might appreciate on your writing task 1 It...

Writing FeedbackFatirtalent - Sep 26, 2016 / Janet7 - Sep 26, 2016
The Rewards of Taking Risks: Facing my Fear of Public Speaking

2 - ..., the bullying escalated in middle school to the point where I ... -I think you should remove the...

Writing Feedbackleo nma - Sep 26, 2016 / akn_24 - Sep 26, 2016
The number of people, who want o leave Bulgaria according to their education rank around three years

2 - Hi Giansy you have done a great job please check my suggestions first, it is much better to...

Writing FeedbackGiansy11 - Sep 26, 2016 / rosadesiana - Sep 26, 2016
In 1981 butter was the most popular spread among others

2 - Hi fauziyahtami, you have done a great job, here are my suggestions for you ==> The graph below...

Writing Feedbackfauziyahtami - Sep 26, 2016 / rosadesiana - Sep 26, 2016
Summary Article : These Are the Forgotten Victims of the West's Drought

4 - Hallo Andika, i have some corrections for you. It became changed the environment which are is (look the...

Writing Feedbackandika08 - Sep 16, 2016 / Giansy11 - Sep 26, 2016
Creativity is as important in education as literacy and we have to treat it with same status.

3 - Hi Aris05 In this topic, the speaker would sayspeak about creativity. ... education as literacy,and we ... ......

Writing FeedbackAris05 - Sep 26, 2016 / Janet7 - Sep 26, 2016
Most People are missing out on incredible opportunities all of the time, making bad decisions

2 - Hii Eve.. it is clearly summary, i only want to give some suggestions. 1. carefully with the capital...

Writing Feedbackeve01 - Sep 26, 2016 / Giansy11 - Sep 26, 2016
GRE argument writing issue - censoring internet at workplace

4 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections ... Climpson Industries should be impelement electronic tools...

Writing FeedbackJayR - Sep 22, 2016 / andika08 - Sep 26, 2016
Artic snow dissolved are killing animals and will be caribou aground

2 - Hi PHA ! you have done a great job, here are some suggestions .. keep writing !! ==>...

Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Sep 26, 2016 / rosadesiana - Sep 26, 2016
TED Summary: Forget Multitasking, try monotasking by Paolo Cardini

2 - According to merriam webster [capitalization issue ] dictionary, multitasking is the ability ... ... on monotask project and...

Writing Feedbackkiev - Sep 26, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 26, 2016

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