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Doctor is the most important person for society
'our life would be easier'; government's money for improving computer technology
IELTS Task 2 : Advertising increase tendency to buy unneeded thing Abdurasul
08:45am
Individuals should not be allowed to carry guns - 'used for illegal purposes'

6 - Be a little more specific on the second paragraph!

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Umidabonu - Apr 19, 2014
bestonline99
08:45am
IELTS; mobile phone impacts on people's lives

6 - Overall, it shows adequate reasoning with few errors.

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linh110 - Apr 21, 2014
bestonline99
08:44am
IELTS: Graph of the winter heating costs from 2003 to 2011 Apsari
08:40am
IELTS Task 1: The audiences of radio and television for full the day in 1992. Apsari
08:32am
Task II : Internet, the most significant invention in the last 30 years ammus1
08:03am
GRE: analyze and issue -- technology will deteriorate human thinking
Cultural Changes in Music from Generation to Generation niesaysi
07:31am
IELTS: 'sense of cooperation' - children should be competitive or cooperative? yuchiu
07:09am
Unemployment rates in US and Japan from March 1993 to March 1999

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upinipin - Yesterday
BOMAT_IRA
06:36am
International student from an emerging market economy; course essay Serg007
06:32am
Radio and television audience in UK

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upinipin - 03:37am
BOMAT_IRA
06:28am
IELTS TASK 1: The winter heating costs according to heating fuel type

2 -  use past tense, miss..:)

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Eva Novita Sari - 03:57am
BOMAT_IRA
06:22am
radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992. dumi
06:08am
IELTS: Sector of the economy - different age groups were employed. dumi
05:51am
IELTS TASK 1 : The winter heating cost costumers dumi
05:11am
Ielts: Discuss both harms and good of advertising & give your opinion SHanafi
04:43am
Toefl-Teachers encouraging students to question everything 'for our knowledge, o dumi
04:40am
IELTS General Training; 'growing trend of increasing the retirement age' dumi
04:35am
IELTS Task 1: The unemployment rates: US and Japan - 5% in March 99

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BOMAT_IRA - Yesterday
Eva Novita Sari
03:55am
Ielts: 'the corner stone' - Is freedom of speech necessary in a free society? dumi
03:50am
Toefl evalution - STAYING IN A PLACE WHERE SEASON CHANGE OR IN A PLACE WHERE IT DO NOT. dumi
03:49am
IELTS TASK 1; region and by gender for the year 2000.

8 -  i hope you explain more in this paragraph

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Eva Novita Sari - Apr 10, 2014
upinipin
03:46am
advertising issues; regulate a law prohibiting unacceptable advertising dumi
03:45am
What are the qualities of a good neighbor? 'care your attitude to other people'

7 -  sing or plur

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ernhy - Mar 26, 2014
upinipin
03:33am
IELTS: Marriages are bigger and more expensive nowadays than in the past. Why is this? dumi
03:33am
IELTS: Sector of the economy - employment by age

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upinipin - Yesterday
Eva Novita Sari
03:12am
These days, fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in high schools. dumi
02:21am
IELTS Task 1: The sector of economy for employment fikri
01:22am
IELTS: visits abroad; some persons visit to abroad because they have some gains fikri
01:14am
IELTS Task 1 : Different age group work in economical sector dumi
12:36am
'various viewpoints' Extreme sports should be banned or not? eddies
Yesterday
IELTS; mobile phones and precautions Pahan
Yesterday
IELTS: Visits abroad by UK residents by purpose of visit Pahan
Yesterday
Do you agree that the traditional skills will die out? -- IELTS Essay Goleo8
Yesterday
An increasing number of people change their career and place of residence ammus1
Yesterday
"Get bored because nothing to do around" - a new movie theater may be built Pahan
Yesterday
Lost flight data recorders! What is going on?

1 - that is very useful information!

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don2074978 - Yesterday
uzboy
Yesterday
Parents should allow their children to select their own profession Arun0506
Yesterday
IELTS: The diagram about the evolution of the horse

2 - I have attached_))

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Shokhusrav - Yesterday
Shokhusrav
Yesterday
IELTS; Learning with a teacher or learning alone - Which one do you prefer? Pahan
Yesterday
Toefl - going to classes should be optional for the students Pahan
Yesterday
Painter, director, writter, photographers - creatives artists, expressing their own ideas. eddies
Yesterday
Should wealthy nations be required to share among poorer; education and food - government eddies
Yesterday
ToEFL EVALUTION - government money grant for arts or enviornment safety. eddies
Yesterday
Ielts task 2: In some countries the average weight of people is increasing.

8 - Thank you))) You're very helpful!)

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Abdurasul - Apr 19, 2014
Abdurasul
Yesterday
Advertising is a cause of fast food overconsumption in India among children dumi
Yesterday
IELTS: The process of apple how to be canned; 'apple tree' dumi
Yesterday
Write a report about education in Australia between 1997 and 2005. eddies
Yesterday
IELTS: man to man interaction changed; reason - technology dumi
Yesterday
IELTS: people should create a sense of co-operation in their children dumi
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Ielts: Bricks manufacturing process from clay dumi
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Honesty vs Telling lies - persuasive essay dumi
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IELTS :How apple is canned? 'durable before it is bought' dumi
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Task - Are Macro-sports events good in easing international tensions? dumi
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Apple canning process; 'sterilizing from bacteria'

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upinipin - Apr 19, 2014
Eva Novita Sari
Yesterday
IELTS: 'all processes occur in the water' - Live cycle of a frog Eva Novita Sari
Yesterday
IELTS TASK 2; Students VS Homework - unnecessary encumbrance

8 -  first paragraph you can not enter your assume

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ernhy - Apr 5, 2014
upinipin
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