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Write about your life ten years from now (100 words)


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Mar 31, 2010, 02:56am   #
Write about your life ten years from now (100 words). Remember to use Relative Clauses, Future Forms. You should tell :
Where you will live
How the place where you live will change
Describe your study or work
Family life
Your friends


I myself sometimes wonder how my life will change after ten years. It is such a long time that everything will certainly change a lot.

The most important change is that I will almost certainly get my qualifications after studying abroad nearly ten years. Consequently, I will start running my own business in Viet Nam. Furthermore, I will probably live in a luxury house which will be surrounded by a very lovely private garden with green grass, roses and a small botanic garden. However, I definitely won't have enough time for my family and friends. At any rate, I will try my best to spare time for them at weekends.

In conclusion, I hope that my life in the future will be more comfortable.

oldbabie:
Describe your study or and work
--- tell them that study and work are both ongoing.


I myself sometimes wonder...

Furthermore, I will probably live in a luxury house which will be surrounded by a very lovely private garden with green grass, roses and a small botanic garden. However, I definitely won't have enough time for my family and friends. At any rate, I will try my best to spare time for them at weekends.--- that sounds terrible! The interest in luxury is superficial and the plan to neglect family and friends is terrible. Write that you will GUARD AGAINST letting this happen. For example, you can settle for an ordinary house and save some time for family!! :-)

Also, it might be nice to express some interest in alleviating suffering in some way.. making it so that your success benefits some people. What kind of business are you talking about starting? Let's express some detailed plans....


:-)



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