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I have to write an essay about my favorite book and I choose the old story


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could everyone fix my mistake please because I am not good on write. thanks

MY FAVOURITE BOOK

I have read so many books that I can not determine which one is my favorite. But I certainly say one thing: the world in the books. The world is known and unknown, beautiful and ugly, cured and humane, real and fictional. Anyway I really like to read old stories. For example: Snow White and The Seven Dwarfs, Beauty and the Beast, Cinderella ...
I love to read it because that always have happy the end. The old story, which is teaching me so many lessons, makes me feel exited. Forever, it tells us if you do the right thing you will get the good thing. Also, those make me believe in the true loves that like the princess and the prince when they fault in love with someone who is not aristocracy.
The old story shows people the way to have a virtuous life. It makes my soul be generous for everyone.
In conclusions, I love to read old story and I wish my life will be one of the beautiful scene of those story. I love happy ending.

Sep 13, 2011, 02:37pm   #
I have some bad news...you should really choose a book. When an essay is assigned, you are partly judged on how well you comprehend and follow the instructions. You must have read at least one book which stands out among the rest, like which one made you feel the most emotion? If you choose one which affected your life in any way, it will be easy to write. Then send it back here and we'll have a look at it!
What you wrote is heart felt and interesting, but does not fit the assignment. Sorry!

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