I introduce current world with real events at the introduction. I bring reasons and depict those with "maybe","may" as a kind of possibilities statements.
may do this as a kind of prospective jobs.
may have innovation and invention in these ways and their creativity will be increase.
I try to analyze them. I don't bring vivid examples, ... but I talk about NGO, ... I bring my example as introduction model.
So, I support my introduction with some reasons.
I bring my position
too. As you see
It is taught that working in paid and voluntary institutes are better.
in this statement.
In Australia IELTS preparation video Miss "Margot Politis" says about how we can state our position in the formal essay like task 2 ielts. So, I did as she said.
You know "
It is taught that
" is a passive statement that we have to bring it in our position in formal speaking/essays.
In this address you can download and see these video's that she teach. they are approximately 70 or maybe 80 videos.
Those video have many subtle points which a native speaker talk about IELTS reality points.
thanks in advance for your ideas,