...gives me good
advice and I can trust...
You write very well, but I think you can go deeper in your mediation. In a moment of meditation, pay attention when you inhale... pay attention to the feeling of cool air hitting the center of your brain... and wait for an excellent, unexpected idea to come to mind.
I think you can come up with a perfect word
to capture what you learn from your sister.
Let this little essay express a profound idea.