For thousands of years
human beings' lives have been affected by violence.
the lives of human beings have been affected by violence.
Year after year
Every year this phenomenon becomes more serious and dangerous.
It contains many kinds
There are many kinds of violence, but the most common is the violence against women which needs to a radical treatment.
< No sure what you are saying in this part of the sentence. Since women are the most vulnerable to violence, organizations and many laws were legislated as attempts to protect women from violence. There are many causes of this phenomenon. According to psychologists, lack of education, media, and nature are the
leading reasons which lead to this non-civilized phenomenon.
Most people, according to recent studies, who are practicing violence against women are not educated. Therefore, violence against women is more common in underdeveloped countries in education than developed countries in education.
<--This needs to be revised, it does not make sense. Recent studies tell us that 30% of women in U.S were exposed to violence whereas at least one of every three women were victims of violence in Egypt. WHO and UNICEF declared that at least one of every three women was exposed to batter, rape, or to other
forms of violence around the world. Psychologists believe, the violence against women is the most dangerous kind of violence.
This form of violence affects negatively on the women's psychology,and it leads to pillars vibration of the community. Psychologists believe, that educating people could be considerable start in the struggle against violence.
Media, according to psychologists, can affect the way we think, respond, and act without knowing. According to psychologists, media can address our conscious without our knowledge,and it could make violence as a new way to deal with our obstacles or disobedience to our orders. Activists in the field of women's rights expressed their surprise about not covering the cases of violence against women. They say, there are many inspiration stories about women who were vulnerable to violence which deserve making movies about. They believe, media can have an essential role in their fight against the violence. psychologists resembled media to a double-edged sword, they believe that media can be a powerful element in struggling violence or inciting on violence.
I did not feel like editing the whole essay, but you have many grammatical mistakes that you need to assess.