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Variety and exploring new ideas by people is spice of life


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Jul 5, 2012, 02:54am   #1
variation is the only thing which makes life interesting and worth living. Life needs constant variation without it life becomes boring and stagnant. New innovations, technologies and knowledge are the ingrediants of variety. Experiancing new ideas and innovations broaden one's vision and increase efficiency. When a person will have new ideas. He will also make them part of his life and try to avail benefits from them.
For example a person want to bring some change in his life then the first of all he will adopt new fashion. People get bored of same trends in fashion and search for new trends in fashion. This attitude effects the designer's business that is why they always try to introduce new ideas regarding fashion to get the attention of people. Same case is with education sector. Till a school introduces new education trends, people dmit their childern in that school. When a new school opens with new education trends then people attract towards that school.
It is the common human behaviour that they always attract towards new things and these innovations emerge from exploring things. If people stop exploring the ideas then life will become stagnant and no thrill and excitment will remain in life.

Jul 5, 2012, 03:17am   #2
variation is the only thing which makes life interesting and worth living. Life needs constant variation (use synonym) and without it life would becomes boring and stagnant. New innovations, technologies and knowledge are the key ingrediants (Spelling) of variety. Experiancing new ideas and innovations broaden one's vision and increase his/her efficiency. When a person will have new ideas (this sentence sounds incomplete). He will also make them as the parts of his life and try to avail benefits from them.
For example a person who wants to bring some changes in his life then the first of all he will adopt new fashion (this sentence is not clear? revise it). People get bored of same trends in fashion and search for new trends in fashion. (Repetition!!) This attitude (toward what?) effects the designers' business and steers them that is why they always try to introduce new ideas regarding fashion to get draw/attract the attention of people. The Same case is with education sector. Till a school introduces new education trends, people dmit (Spelling-admit)their childern (spelling-children) in that school. When a new school opens with new education trends system then people attract towards that school.
It is the common human behaviour that they are always attract drown towards new things and these innovations emerge from exploring things. If people stop exploring the ideas then (u used the word "then" for several times. Avoid any repetition) life will become stagnant and no thrill and excitment (spelling-excitement )will remain in life.

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Ahmad
Jul 5, 2012, 03:23am   #3
Silentlips:
For example when a person want to bring some changes into his life then the first of all thing he will does is to adopt new a fashion.

What do you mean by adopting new fasoin?
Jul 5, 2012, 05:54am   #5
Silentlips:
I mean new trends in dresses, shoes, bags etc

Ok, then say ;
For example, we often get bored with the same style of dressing and therefore we quickly move into new trends and fasions.



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