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Using machines is very helpful because you can save time and effort


mayenlu 2 / 6  
Jun 11, 2010   #1
Hi everyone, I am new here, and I want to practice my writting under pressure because I plan to take The TOEFL IBTtest, maybe this year, but I know that I need a lot of practice before. Can you help me with your feedback, please!!! (time 25 minutes)

Some people like doing work by hand, others prefer using machines which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answers.

Nowadays, technology is developing more and more. We have machines almost for everything and there are many people that take advantage of this by using them because it makes their work faster and easier. However, I believe that it is better to work by hand because it makes your work unique and more valuable.

Working by hand can make your work unique because you can do it the way you want. You can give your personal touch by using details that let you express your personality and creativity. Thus, you won't find anything like yours, maybe similar, but not the same.

Moreover, hand working is also more valuable because of its unique characteristic and all the time and effort that this requires. This is the reason why tourists all around the world prefer to buy things done by hand, even if they have to pay more because they vale the work of people and it is not something they can find everywhere.

Therefore, it is true that using machines is very helpful because you can save time and effort. Nonetheless, I would definitely prefer doing work by hand because of the uniqueness and especial value that this have.
babyevy 3 / 27  
Jun 14, 2010   #2
Hi Maria,

I am glad you are here, I read your essay and It is very good and organized.Maybe you can try to write a little more, but I know that it is very difficult when you are writing under pressure. I really don't know if there is a required number of words, but if kevin said that you can get a passsing score that is for sure, because he definetly knows more about that!!! He is really awsome!! : )

CONGRATULATIONS MY FRIEND!!! continue practicing...

there are just TWO MISTAKES, I found, apart from Kevin's...

that lets you express your personality and creativity
they valu e the work of people and it is not something they can find everywhere
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129  
Jun 15, 2010   #3
if kevin said that you can get a passsing score that is for sure, because he definetly knows more about that

Actually, I want to be clear about this... I am not involved in any of these writing tests and don't know about the ways they are scored. I just think the English is of high quality, because it is better writing than some people can accomplish even if they have grown up speaking English.

We all have errors in our writing. If I were you I would feel confident.


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