mahdi 2 / - Mar 17, 2007 #1A university plans to develop a new research center in your country.Some people want a center for business research. Other people want a centerfor research in agriculture (farming). Which of these two kinds of researchcenters do you recommend for your country? Use specific reasons in yourrecommendation.I am not an economist . So I can not argue about this subject scientificaly.So what I will say are only my personal opinions.I think that answer of thisquestion strongly depends on area that we are living in.I am living in iranand I think that a center for agricultural research is better than a centerfor bussiness research.I have my own reasons for this opinion that I will poit outbelow :Firstly , iran exports billions of barrels of oil to other countries each year. Gavernment earnsa lot of money from export of oil and gas and uses most fraction of them for military purposesand daily consumption of people . Goverment is very big and people donot have enough money forgreat bussineses because they can not compete with the government.Goverment opposeswith globalization .There are small stocks with limited exchanges and bussines dont exist in ourcountry in high level.So I think that developing a center for bussines affairs with this situationis only the waste of money.Seconly,Iran imports million tons of agricultural products evry year.A lot of people immigrateto urban areas from rural areas every year . Tehran is capital of iran that have 12 millionpeople whereas iran has 60 million people. it makes tehran one of the polluted cities in the world.tehran has also very traffic problems . I think that developing an agricultural center can helpfor stopping immagration to urban areas . This can help to reduce consumtopns of the countryand equal supply and demand.All in all ,I think that a center dor research in agriculture is necessary for iran and maybethis is not a good plan for other countries.
EF_Team2 1 / 1,708 Mar 18, 2007 #2Greetings!You make some persuasive points in your essay! I have some suggestions for editing your essay:I am not an economist . So I can not argue about this subject scientificaly. - It would be better to make this one sentence. "I am not an economist, so I cannot argue about this subject scientifically."Goverment opposes with globalization .- I'm not sure what this means. Perhaps you mean to say the government opposes globalization?Tehran is capital of iran that have 12 million people whereas iran has 60 million people. - This is not grammatically correct. Say, "Tehran is the capital of Iran; it has 12 million of the country's 60 million people."You have quite a few misspelled words. Be sure to run your essay through a spell-checker.Best of luck with your studies!Sarah, EssayForum.com