Hey...What's the type of essay? Agree/ disagree? It's good to know what your prompt asks for and make sure you have it in the essay.
Whether to maintain the exam to enter university is always a controversial matter
and in my opinion, there are some specific reasons why this exam should not be kept in the educational system.
... As I mentioned above, if this essay is agree/ disagree sort of , then you better express your opinion very direct. Tell you agree or disagree for certain reasons.
Firstly, the university entrance exam can wrongly reflect students' ability.
... good point, I agree :)
There are pupils whostudy excellently but may still fail this exam.
.... I guess you should talk about their knowledge level. Studying has no value if they don't acquire knowledge.