Hello! It's nice to have you back!
My family and I
decided to go by bike on this trip because we all wanted to enjoy the atmosphere there.
We felt very excited about this place.---What was the place called? You should mention it here.
After having lunch at my grandparents' house, we took a short nap and made all preparations
to go fishing with
in the afternoon.
The lake beside the house has many fishes,
and we had a joyful time
and a lot of dishes cooked with the fish
in the evening. That
was our first day.
On the second day, we got up early and rode
around the village.
On the third day, dad and mom allowed my sister and I to help my grandparents with the work in
The summer comes, either the harvest does.---This sentence is not right. Should it say, 'the harvest comes after the summer, perhaps? It's just the word 'either' that doesn't belong.
People are very
busy to collecting
We had a day full of hard work
It was such a memorable holiday
of mine, we felt very happy during the
after time rest
of that summer, and all sorrow had
What a beautiful essay! Glad to have you back with us!