The twenty first century experienced a
significant growth in
Nations around the world have come closer together than they have
before to support each other in all areas
many people believe
that richer countries should provide aid
such as food and education to poorer countries.
However, this is refuted by others in that the governments of less developed nations should assume the responsibility of taking
care of their people themselves.
Both these arguments will be critiqued before a reasonable
conclusion can be drawn.
For example, thousands of people in less developed African countries such as Kenya,
are starving and many do not...
Thus, to ensure the right to achieve at least the standard of total well being
, having enough food and a
sufficient education for
those people in poor countries, more aid is
needed from wealthy nations.
...poorer nations should not rely on the help of wealthier nations but look
after their citizens themselves.
It can be understood the reason why some people would hold this idea, because
if less-developed countries are so dependent on the aids from well-developed countries then they would probably become a
kind of colony to those wealthier nations. This is therefore it is guessed that this argument may garner some support.
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... is felt that the argument in
which richer nations should share their wealth and hence provide aids to poorer nations is more supported
it is hoped that in the
future there will be more help
from wealthy countries...
I agree!! Good luck in school!