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IELTS; tuition fees, who are responsible to pay?


codeblue 5 / 9 1  
Apr 4, 2014   #1
Students should pay the full cost of university studies,rather than have free higher education provided by the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Over the last few decades, student's fees have been a constant subject of debate due to increasing charge at most universities. A number of people opine that each student must pay for their own university fees, whilst others, including me contend with this.

There are several multifarious reasons that it is justifiable for the state to take full responsibility in providing free education for everyone. First, people are obliged to pay high amount of taxes, even those who are less fortunate. It is also lucrative for the government sine everyone will be able to finish their chosen courses, land a good job and eventually help improve the economy of the country. In addition, university expenditures are much more expensive compared to school level education; hence, not everyone can bear the burden of sending students to a university most especially if there are two or more students in a family. What's more, there are many extraordinary learners who belong to less fortunate families. If the government will not be able to give opportunity for these types of students, the country will ultimately lose an important asset that can drive the economy into a higher level.

On the other hand, opponents declare that university education should not be free at all because there are many issues more important than giving free education that need to be tackled first. For example in India, over population, health, food and clean water supply need more emphasis since these are indispensable for the survival of the country. Additionally, it is more difficult for the magistrates to provide free education for there are some college courses that are costly and could impede the growing economy of a nation. Instead of extravagantly spending money on education, states could splurge into infrastructures which provide work for people so they can send their children to university.

In conclusion, it is fundamental for the government to focus on the education system by providing everyone a free access to a higher education. After all, education is considered to be one of the most important treasures of any country.
kikiliyik 12 / 35 2  
Apr 4, 2014   #2
" to increasing" (to increase)
"There are several multifarious reasons that it is justifiable for..." (double subject)
Rich Monte 2 / 94 2  
Apr 4, 2014   #3
a free access to a higher education.

There is very weak correlation between a college degree and job prospects. In fact, more and more college degree holders flip burgers at McDonald's (IF they are lucky to get a job there with 12:1 prospective employees ratio). Instead of wasting 4 years in college and be in 80K debt, opening your own business and working hard instead of counting on tax payer's money is a much better idea. If we start with free access to iphones, foods, contraceptives, colleges, then why stop there? How about giving everyone a free car and housing - after all we all deserve it with minimum or no effort on our part, right?

It is also lucrative for the government

So you want to punish those who actually contribute to the economy (tax payers) and make a sweet deal to the government? I don't see much sense in this reasoning.
dumi 1 / 6,925 1592  
Apr 5, 2014   #4
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Nhasir Rahmatia 6 / 9  
Apr 7, 2014   #5
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this sentence is not complete, the main verb is not clear and many words get miss spelling,


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