IELTS TOPIC: In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? has this become a positive or negative development?
21st century has witnessed
that with the advent
of advances in technology, WITH REGARD TO the way
people ARE connecting or interacting with each WHICH IS
not as same as 10 years ago.
It is generally believed that science and technology have come to pervade a variety OF types of personal relationship. First of all, telephones and CELLULAR PHONES can be regardED as a necessary part of human life in modern society. Compared to the TRADITIONAL
BUILDING OR ESTABLISHING relationships, SUCH AS writing letters or visiting a friend's home, this new technology gives people THE ABILITY TO CONTACT others in a easier way. Moreover, increasing numbers of computers have
ENTERED our lives. THEREFORE THE WORLD WIDE WEB
has greatly changed the PREDOMINANT OR SOCIALLY ACCEPTABLE way of communication. Social
SOCIAL MEDIA, such as Facebook or twitter, allows people to
RECONNECT WITH old acquaintance
AS WELL AS ESTABLISHING new friends by
simply clicking their
BY THE SIMPLE CLICK OF A mouse. Additionally, some
TELEVISION PROGRAMS HAVE also playED a crucial role IN THE
changing OF people's interacting method. For example, a show named 'Find your true love' is quite popular in Japan. IT introduces men to young ladies via three or four videos. Interestingly, 80% women suggest that they believe they can find their Mr. Right by this program.
In spite of the TECHNOLOGICAL BENIFITS ( time and money saving), its drawbacks should not be ignored. For one thing, as a result of greatly relying on TELEVISION or computer, people are likely to stay at home becoming couch-dwellers, INTROVERTS AND BEGIN TO lead a sedentary lifeSTYLE. Undoubted, this kind of lifestyle could pose threat to people's physical health condition, further, leading them to suffer from mental disease, such as, depression. For another, it is possible for many people to lose the capacity to making friends. Yet, managing interpersonal relationship in a real context is a comprehensive skill, which is not simply like inputting a name on a webpage.
In sumMARY, we cannot stop the influence of the technology,
seen every corner of the world
WITNESSED WORLD WIDE. Yet, what we can do is to take the advantage and endeavour to minimise the adverse effects. After all, human beings is an active creature. The most appropriate lifestyle for us is not living on an isolated land, but interacting with other social members constantly.
Did I off the topic? writing is a tough job.
'human beings' 'science and technology' should use ' is' or 'are' ?
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