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[IELTS] - Topic: Children Learn Foreign Language Early


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Jul 6, 2012, 05:38am   #
Topic: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school. Use specific reasons and example to support your position.

" Nowadays, the 21st century made a huge steps in developing technologies and reached many goals that made our life better. Language is the most important to communicate in many fields such as economy, science, negotiation,... It is not enough to be able to speak one language to get through with the outside world. I am strongly put up with the idea that children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school. In the following paragraph I will make a list of some reasons to show my point of view.

First of all, If one wants to se outcome soon, one must start sooner. Children like "a new paper" and it is easy to learn a new language. We should teach them when they were a little child. In the modern life, we have to deal with customers, exchange culture with another countries, read academic documentations or make friends all around the world, all of them is the reason why we should to become at least a bilingualism. So, the early children learn a new language is better than the one learns later.

Second of all, adult is so easy to make mistakes when they pronunciate a word that is the reason we can not get over the language barrier to speak freely and fluently. Children do not give a hoot on their grammar, they just repeat as exactly as they hear, if they do not pronunciate well, they will go back to the drawing board to practise again during their outdoor activities.

Eventually, we should make up our mind to support children learn a new language. Helping them improve language little by little that is a good way to make them have a fantastic future."

I truly appreciate the time you took to read my essay.

Best regards,

Klein

Jul 6, 2012, 06:57am   #
Klein Evans:
" Nowadays, the The 21st century made a huge steps in developing technologies and reached many goals that made our life better.

Nowadays become redundant when you say "the 21st century"

Klein Evans:
Language is the most important tool in to communicate communication in many fields such as economy, science, negotiation,...

The part I deleted sounds irrelevant

Klein Evans:
It is not enough to be able to speak one language to get through connected with the outside world.


Klein Evans:
I am strongly put up support with the idea that children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school

I support, I put up / I am supporting, I am putting up

Improve your grammar and vocabulary. Your intro displays all necessary features it should have. :)
Jul 6, 2012, 09:57am   #
Klein Evans:
Nowadays, The 21st century ( either Nowadays or 21st century - use only one) made a huge steps in developing technologies and reached many goals that made our life better. Language is the most important to medium of communicateion.

The first and second sentences are disconnected to each other. What technological developments have to do with language learning , ------ if possible,[establish that link to make both sentences interconnected.

It is not enough to be able to speak [/s] One language is not enough to get through connected with the outside world. I am strongly put up agree with the idea that children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school. In the following paragraph I will make a list of elaborate or state or describe some reasons to show my point of view..

Klein Evans:
First of all, If one wants to see outcome soon, one must start sooner at early age. Children like "a new paper" ( you tried to use analogy here. This is very GOOD. ..but it is not clear enough).and it is easy to learn a new language. We should teach them when they were a little child. ( my suggestion is; [font#FF0000] Children are like "clay to potters," Teaching at early age can mould them into multilingual communicator.[/font]
In the modern life, we have This skill helps to deal with customers, cultural exchange culture with an other countries, read academic documentations or even make friends all around the world. all of them is the reason That is why we children should be [s]to become at least a bilingualism. So, the early children learn a new language is better than the one learns later.
( this sentence is repeated .. delete it or say it differently)

[i]Klien,
You should include some more reasons. You pointed out children's learning capacity is better in first reason. and your second reason also carry almost the same meaning as the first. Think about more "Reasons"... why on early age or why not inj school etc..


Some suggestions;
# children at school learn with specialised materials using structured method . This helps to grasp new language easily without much effort.
# speaking new words is fun among peers. Sharing secrets among close friends in unknown language. Helping learn faster with fun.
# high school or college level students have to concentrate in other more important areas of study. So they do not get enough time to concentrate in learning new language.
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Jul 6, 2012, 12:18pm   #
pinkyjuju:
Dear teachers,
Can I post my essay (with similar topic) on the message to let it be edited by you?
Thanks for your help

Pinkyjuju,
First, we are not teachers here.We, all; are students who are trying to better our language skill.


Yes, you can start your own thread and it will be reviewed.
Go to the top right "New Thread" button and start your thread.
Good luck!



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