Consequently/As a result
Consequences, other people wanted to listen their opinion or follow them
, other people want to listen to their opinion or follow them.
I agree that the statement
I agree with
Famous people is definitely different
Famous people are
They have talent and they are genius and wisdom.
They have the talent and are ingenious
I believe that when famous people give some opinions about problem
I believe that when they give their opinion about a
There are also some exception like politician
There are also some exceptions
Political leaders always famous and most of time they tell lie
Political leaders are
always famous and most of time they
The second reason is honor for famous people
The second reason is the importance these people give for their honor.
We give so much respect to the famous people. They don't want to loose their honor
They are respected a lot and they wouldn't want to lose their honor.
As example, Kapil Dev, he is a famous cricketer. Some players tried to involve him in corruption. He exposed the corruption. As he said earlier, he was innocent, after investigation its cleared that I was really innocent and not involved in any corruption.
Let us consider the example of Kapil Dev - a famous cricketer. Some players tried to involve him in charges of corruption.
He exposed the corruption.
As he had said earlier, his innocence was proves after the investigation and his name was cleared of all corruption charges.
Famous people don't want dishonest. They tries to give correct and appropriate information.
Famous personalities do not want to be associated with dishonesty. They try to cooperate in giving out accurate information.
Some times politician takes disadvantage of their honor. Political leader brings famous people as a idle model in election, to interact voter's.
Some times politicians take undue advantage
of their honor. Political leaders bring
famous people as the face of the party to interact with the voters in an election
In additionally, famous people give more trips for success to newcomers,
, famous people give more tips
for success to newcomers,
We should take their advice on their master area.
We should take their advice in the area of their expertise
In conclusion, though famous people are intelligent and having master is their field, we should listen their opinion in their master field.
famous people are intelligent and have mastery in
their field, we should listen to
their opinion in their master field.
Just make sure you don't confuse between fame and expertise. There are many cases where experts are not necessarily famous and likewise famous personalities are not necessarily experts.
You make use of 'famous people' too often in your write-up. Try using pronouns wherever possible.
You also have quite a few grammatical mistakes in your work. Try to work on them.